women world

women world is very small.It starts from her family where she opens her eyes and then how many people enter in her family they become her world...Her happiness revolves this world...In any stage of life if she separated from family but her heart stay connected to her world.she confines herself to that world....

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  • Main pata aural ka family, uska admi aur bacha. Her world is her parents and her husband. Thanks Anum for sharing. Is it possible to be one of your friends? Thanks.

  •        But I don't think that a woman world is small as u have said it gets  bigger and bigger as she grows up .she has different roles and many responsibilities  . As a daughter   , a wife and a mother at the end .

               In many ancient civilization female  figures were consecrated  , because  only women can give life , which means giving  birth for children. .

              I still remember  my sister words saying to me : I thought it was easy to get pregnant  , I thought  I will be like u or like mom. ..

                 I don't  have a baby  and I can't  now let me tell u it's a miracle  . 

                 Thanks for sharing ur thoughts with us here :) 

  • Very well said.  Good work.  Paula has helped you in correction.

  • Anum I agree that family is a very important part of a woman's life. Of course in this day and time some women never have their own families.  They decide to become career women or whatever.  

    As far as corrections......I can show you how I think it should be written.  

    The title:  A Woman's World

    A woman's world is very small.  It begins with her family from the moment she first open's her eyes.  Many people will enter into her family over time and they will also become a part of her life.  Her happiness revolves around this world.  If for any reason she must separate from her family, her heart will remain connected.  This is her world and she confines herself to it.

    It is the best I could do Anum and try and keep it close to how you have it written.  I hope it helps!!!!!

  • Sounds quite interesting and reasonable. A family plays a significant role in forming one's mind and temper. And yet I don't think a family limits one's world.

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