Once upon a time I loved youYou didn't love meI was blind with loveYou didn't see my eyesI had a 5 years journeyI met you twice every yearNow.... you are silent like a rockI am finding you..... why do you refuse me ???If you say a reason it will be easy me to make prepare my wedding ringYou have a silent heartIt hurts me a lotA love of a poor girlYou never see till you like meIf you don't love meWhy you can't tell it direct?If you hate meWhy don't you tell it loudSilent is not an answer..........Love is waiting till I dieshining ring is waiting thereI will marry him bcz of youYOU stay my heart and hurt me ......
Thank you my dear friends... specially AG...your support is the best thing I had ever......My friends. Thank you very much to read me and put some comments...
hello Shey, it's really you who will prepare the wedding ring? kidding! :D A cool girl can melt a silent heart. Don't wait till you die, do something about it, been there and done that. So no regrets, no ifs, no buts. :D
shay, this silence is killing silence and in case nobody says a word...why should we waste our time...the most precious thing we have we would spend on waiting for nothing? Hell NO! :D nice post...
Akohomoda Shey, no need to run after a mirage. Leave that love and fetch another. There are plenty of hearts waiting for those who knocked their doors. Don't let that love stay in your heart and hurt you. Start a new one. Nice poem!
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sometimes one could be blessed for the silence . for a good reason and real happiness from some one who cherishes you as well .....
Looking forward to your next poem/blog...
Stay Happy Dear...
hello Shey, it's really you who will prepare the wedding ring? kidding! :D A cool girl can melt a silent heart. Don't wait till you die, do something about it, been there and done that. So no regrets, no ifs, no buts. :D
Once upon a time, Ohnie did it to me.. and here I am replying the same way to your poem :)
She : Once upon a time I loved you
He: that time, I loved you more and still.
She: You didn't love me.
He: You were so silly not to realize my love.
She: I was blind with love
He: you were really blind not to see my return love.
She: You didn't see my eyes.
He: I didn't see anything but your eyes.
She: I had a 5 years journey
He: I still remember how wonderful that time was :)
She: I met you twice every year
He: I was counting the seconds and moments for our meeting.
She: Now.... you are silent like a rock.
He: your love makes me hurtfully speechless.
She: I am finding you..... why do you refuse me ???
He: You still do not realize that I refuse to enjoy the life without you but not you..
She: If you say a reason it will be easy me to make prepare my wedding ring.
He: Again I am speechless of your love.
She: You have a silent heart.
He: Yes, I do.. And it's full of you..
She: It hurts me a lot.
He: it hurts me more if you know.
She: A love of a poor girl.
He: it's my best honor in life.
She: You never see till you like me.
He: you don't know that It's all what I see.
She: If you don't love me.
He: Look into my eyes and you will see my love..
She: Why you can't tell it direct?
He: Coz, I want you to look into my eyes and see it.
She:If you hate me.
He: I hate my life when you are far away.
She: Why don't you tell it loud.
He: OK.. I HATE ME LIFE WHEN YOU ARE FAR AWAY.
She: Silent is not an answer..........
He: What can I do to make you hear me.
She: Love is waiting till I die.
He: Love is waiting till I die.
She: shining ring is waiting there.
He: There is no ring like my heart shining there into your finger.
She: I will marry him bcz of you.
He: I will love you till I die.
She: YOU stay my heart and hurt me ......
He: I don't wanna see you hurt again..
Akohomoda Shey, no need to run after a mirage. Leave that love and fetch another. There are plenty of hearts waiting for those who knocked their doors. Don't let that love stay in your heart and hurt you. Start a new one. Nice poem!