Whether you believe me or not I do not care. ( Farewell blog)

Hello everyone,

After a long time, I have made an attempt to check my poetic skill, whether a small poet is still alive in me or not. So, please read and let me know your opinions.

Being arrogant is not the matter of dare;
But to waste your time and bring no cheer
An appropriate line of tolerance I can share
Whether you believe me or not I do not care.

It's One God Who moves everything in its sphere
No body without His consent can interfere His affair
He sent all Prophets to us for making us happier
Whether you believe me or not I do not care.

Ibrahim, Moses, and Jesus all my beloved and dear
But I follow Muhammad who broke oppressed's barrier
Who taught us the difference between fair and unfair
Whether you believe me or not I do not care.

By speaking the truth, you can remove all worry and fear,
No matter whether you are in how unpleasant atmosphere
Trust in Allah Who is always to you very near
Whether you believe me or not I really do not care.

I have been learning on this site for about four year
After this post I will delete account or forever disappear
you may not find me on Facebook nor anywhere
Whether you believe me or not I do not care.

Whether you listen so much music or drink a lot of beer
Whether you go to temple, church or mosque for your prayer
But to tell you the truth, I was to you very sincere
Whether you believe me or not I really do not care.

I have written this poem in the light of this verse of Quran.
(Al Quran 2: 256)
"There is no compulsion in religion. Certainly, right has become clearly distinct from wrong. Whoever rejects the devil and believes in God has firmly taken hold of a strong handle that never breaks. God is All-hearing and knowing."

Thank you in advance.

I apologize to all my learning partners if I unintentionally hurt you. One of my best experience in this site is to compose first poem, which I posted here on August, 2011 was

The wiser find me wise
The kinder find me kind
It depends on mind
Good mind, Good find

One of the most blessings given by Allah almighty to the humanity is the broad spectrum in differences among the mankind. One can enjoy such differences to the utmost only and that's all for them. Someone else can enjoy such differences and in meanwhile assembles some of his TODAY for his TOMORROW...I think we Muslims know the way to achieve it and trying hard to reach it and the happy is the one who can balance achieve it and the happier is the one who could succeed to give a hand to anyone else who is far from the will be saved boat to leap to it...but if someone tries it and find that their helping hand is reacted by rejection, then enough for them is the honour of giving it a try, and hence I can join your decision...WHETHER YOU BELIEVE ME OR NOT, I DO NOT CARE...I HAVE ALREADY PRESENTED MY SINCERE SHARE..

By the way, why "farewell"?...Anyway, good luck with whatever you decide for yourself, bro.

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Comments

Arif May 12, 2015 16:47

Sorry for late reply.
Thank you so much for appreciating my peaceful poem.

sir I do believe so and respect international heterogeneity. Here, I just tried to give a peaceful message to the arrogant.

Thank you once again for your valuable comments.
Robinoz March 14, 2015 23:12

Writing a poem in your native language is hard enough; writing in another language must be even more difficult. You've made a good effort, however, I think religious topics need to be kept for sites that focus on religion.

My favourite poet is Omar Khayyam whose Rubyait I read occasionally to remind me of the futility of life and the need to accept that one day it will end.
Arif March 5, 2015 15:01

Just User, Estenis, Sathia, Saba, qadiaid, Areality, Evange, Bob, and Onee-chan.
Thank you all so much for leaving your wonderful and appreciative comments. I really feel glad.
I'll try my level best to keep in touch with all my readers and supporters through blogging and commenting.
Onee-chan February 20, 2015 4:43

Very nice poem. I like the way you tell, and the diction.

I really like it. Have a good day, Arif Saeed.
Mr. Bob February 13, 2015 7:05

I think that first poem may have been your best. Poetry is difficult, but that one came together so well. Short poems are much easier, especially if you are writing in a foreign language.

I wish you good weather, a good life and happiness. Maybe we will meet again somewhere.
qadiaid February 12, 2015 17:29

Alsalam Aleekum my brother Arif, i call Allah protect u and lighten your heart more and more. But please don't disappear. we loved you.
saba February 12, 2015 17:00

Very beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing, I hope you change your decision and this is not your last post.
Sathiavathi km February 11, 2015 23:55

There is a great poet hiding in you. wish you all the best.
Estanis February 11, 2015 20:49

I think the poet in you is so living and keeps on growing.
Thanks for sharing.
Just User February 11, 2015 20:34

One of the most blessings given by Allah almighty to the humanity is the broad spectrum in differences among the mankind. One can enjoy such differences to the utmost only and that's all for them. Someone else can enjoy such differences and in meanwhile assembles some of his TODAY for his TOMORROW...I think we Muslims know the way to achieve it and trying hard to reach it and the happy is the one who can balance achieve it and the happier is the one who could succeed to give a hand to anyone else who is far from the will be saved boat to leap to it...but if someone tries it and find that their helping hand is reacted by rejection, then enough for them is the honour of giving it a try, and hence I can join your decision...WHETHER YOU BELIEVE ME OR NOT, I DO NOT CARE...I HAVE ALREADY PRESENTED MY SINCERE SHARE..

By the way, why "farewell"?...Anyway, good luck with whatever you decide for yourself, bro.

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