Hello everyone,
After a long time, I have made an attempt to check my poetic skill, whether a small poet is still alive in me or not. So, please read and let me know your opinions.
Being arrogant is not the matter of dare;
But to waste your time and bring no cheer
An appropriate line of tolerance I can share
Whether you believe me or not I do not care.
It's One God Who moves everything in its sphere
No body without His consent can interfere His affair
He sent all Prophets to us for making us happier
Whether you believe me or not I do not care.
Ibrahim, Moses, and Jesus all my beloved and dear
But I follow Muhammad who broke oppressed's barrier
Who taught us the difference between fair and unfair
Whether you believe me or not I do not care.
By speaking the truth, you can remove all worry and fear,
No matter whether you are in how unpleasant atmosphere
Trust in Allah Who is always to you very near
Whether you believe me or not I really do not care.
I have been learning on this site for about four year
After this post I will delete account or forever disappear
you may not find me on Facebook nor anywhere
Whether you believe me or not I do not care.
Whether you listen so much music or drink a lot of beer
Whether you go to temple, church or mosque for your prayer
But to tell you the truth, I was to you very sincere
Whether you believe me or not I really do not care.
I have written this poem in the light of this verse of Quran.
(Al Quran 2: 256)
"There is no compulsion in religion. Certainly, right has become clearly distinct from wrong. Whoever rejects the devil and believes in God has firmly taken hold of a strong handle that never breaks. God is All-hearing and knowing."
Thank you in advance.
I apologize to all my learning partners if I unintentionally hurt you. One of my best experience in this site is to compose first poem, which I posted here on August, 2011 was
The wiser find me wise
The kinder find me kind
It depends on mind
Good mind, Good find
Comments
Thank you so much for appreciating my peaceful poem.
sir I do believe so and respect international heterogeneity. Here, I just tried to give a peaceful message to the arrogant.
Thank you once again for your valuable comments.
Writing a poem in your native language is hard enough; writing in another language must be even more difficult. You've made a good effort, however, I think religious topics need to be kept for sites that focus on religion.
My favourite poet is Omar Khayyam whose Rubyait I read occasionally to remind me of the futility of life and the need to accept that one day it will end.
Thank you all so much for leaving your wonderful and appreciative comments. I really feel glad.
I'll try my level best to keep in touch with all my readers and supporters through blogging and commenting.
Very nice poem. I like the way you tell, and the diction.
I really like it. Have a good day, Arif Saeed.
I think that first poem may have been your best. Poetry is difficult, but that one came together so well. Short poems are much easier, especially if you are writing in a foreign language.
I wish you good weather, a good life and happiness. Maybe we will meet again somewhere.
Very beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing, I hope you change your decision and this is not your last post.
Thanks for sharing.
I'll follow the example of the previous comments.:))))) Очень хорошее стихотворение, автор мог бы и не скромничать. Хотя я не очень поняла первый куплет.
Lakum Dinokum wal Yadeen. (Your deen to you and mine to me)
Brilliant Arif. Keep it up.
Kiya haal hain Saeed. Main nathm nahi pasan. Main pasan nathr. Islee main nahi pata kiya bola. Tumara piar Allah taala kilyei aur oska nabi, Moses, Jesus and Mohammed (paboabuh), sub log deka. I prefer prose to poem, but it is quite clear that you own a good taste for poem. Keep on trying my dear good friend. Some day, you might become famous, who knows?