Everybody is running
Everybody is in rush
Everybody is chasing
Everybody is running.....
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I don't know what is there
You don't know what is there
Nobody knows it
but everybody is running......
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I also want it
you also want it
nobody don't want it
and everybody is running for it.....
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I don't know where we are running
you also don't know where are we running
Nobody knows it
but everybody running....
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Somebody reached before me
somebody is behind me
sure everybody will reach their.
What is it?
...............Our graveyard...................
* it is my attempt to write a poem....Please help me by giving your valuable feedback
Comments
It is cool - riddle poem, ap suku... and hahaaaaaaa firstly I thought it would be maybe orgasm lmao as they both were running but then I changed and thought it would be DEATH and was close...so m not that stupid haha :D I like it, indeed!
Mmmmmm Do u mean ? That when it's time for death . We feel the shortness of life . Ur poem is good I like it's idea and rhythm . But. I am still wondering. Dose represents life fast style only ???
And why did u mentioned the graveyard at the end ????
Hi ap suku! Nice poem, but I think that also nobody can stop running:)
hello. nice topic . reality . but this repetition. is it just to achieve cohesion?
Superb!