When I look back ..............

When I look back

at my life so far

loaded with troubles and turmoil

gaiety and grief not at par

the world was lonely the world was unfair

anxiety and anger within me everywhere

then suddenly a voice within

cheered me up like a charming fairy

saying that life wants you to learn and love

and not to make you scary

at times you feel blessed

at times everything is messed

but move on is the one line

no matter you fail or you shine

life is to live and to give your best

just be at peace with you and leave the rest

so here I am empowered and enriched

with lots of love and bliss

live every moment full on 

without a moment to miss

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  • hi Hala J.M

    Hey these words aptly suit my poem

    Thanx a million

    you made my job simpler

    so if you dont mind

    can I use your lines

    But my rhyme scheme will be disturbed

    what do you say

    then suddenly a voice within

    cheered me up like a

  • like a bird ,lifting me up to the sky

    to see the beauty that we are surrounded by ..

    No more tears ...and no more cry ..

    only a smile and shining eyes ....

     

    I hope you like my words dear Anjana :)

     

  • Hi everyone I am all set to bring one more poem out of my world of imagination. Please readers help me to put a beautiful phrase or preferably a simile to complete the last line. Then I would be in position to move further.

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