I want to be kind and I want to keep straight,
I want to lose some kilos of weight.
I want to be more happy with all my dears,
and I want to lose some of my fears.
I want to visit many places on earth,
that is my dream since the day of my birth.
I want to be healthy as long as possible,
the melody of life should be always audible.
I am still looking to find my right way,
I want to find friendship, not only to play.
I want to give my hand to someone who needs,
not only with words but always with deeds.
My life shouldn't be dull, it should be more exciting.
If I want to be happy, I have to keep fighting.
I want to find the balance between busy and calm,
and if I feel sadness, I wish to find comfort and balm.
Following we can't plan but we always can hope,
and maybe one day, we are going to cope,
to make our earth as the most peaceful place,
where no one cares about religion, origin, and race.
I know very exactly, that is not easy to make,
the walls of the wars are not simply to break.
But, someday, there will fly again the white dove,
to bring everyone peace, and freedom, and love.
Comments
Dear Rose,
I like your all wishes especially these lines...
I want to give my hand to someone who needs,
not only with words but always with deeds.
My life shouldn't be dull, it should be more exciting.
If I want to be happy, I have to keep fighting.
But except this....
I want to lose some kilos of weight. LOL.
May your all wishes come true. ^_^
Dear Onee-chan.
When I looked through my old posts, I found that I never thanked you for your kind comment on my poem.
Let me do that now. Better late than never ... right?
I thank you very much, Mishaikh. Your comment is always welcome and appreciated.
Very well rhythmically wished.
It is a flow, the lines run like stream, stream of thought. It is the feeling of mass pouring out though of an individual but making the desire of all. It is a drop but becomes an ocean.
Thanks Rose for praying the desire of the people.
Thanks a lot, George Lee. What a nice compliment!
My English is also not that best, but I always try my best to write poems and short stories in the English language.
If you are interested in reading some of my poems and stories, there are some more on my blog here on MyEC.
Hello, Rose
I like your poem. No difficult words and phrases so it is easy to understand. I also write poem but it is in Chinese. My English is not good enough to write an English poem.
Your poem is very much similar to old style Chinese poem (not modern style). There are four sentences in a group and the rhymes are also at the end. The difference is that the old style poem (in Tang and Song dynasty from 618 to 1279) requires lot of old words and old phrases. As such, the meaning is always ambiguous.
Please write more so that I can learn more.
Thanks to all who liked my poem.
usra riasat, thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. My best wishes for you, too.
Hello Roman, thanks for your detailed comment on my poem.
It seems you have discovered the colors.... LOL!!!
It's nice because no one can overlook it.
Ahmed N.Elmenshawy, thanks for your kind comment on my blog.
I wish you a successful and happy New Year 2018.
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