Hy all member english club, my name is Dedy Setiawan, and i'm indonesian, tonight i just want to write what i want to write, please correct me when you find the mistakes on my blog, especialy on grammar, please show me where is it, and what should sentence to be, ok i'm a worker i'm a project admint, here i just to share what i usually do at my office and at my bourding house after office hours.
i usually wake up at 07.00 AM, Then i start working at 08.30 AM, i like the culture of my office, because many employes use english language, and that makes me happy and spirit to work, ok directly to what i usually do when i'm at bedroom of my boarding house, when i lay at my bed, i usually do something, that is looking to roof, than think about what i did at my office, then make questions for myself, what i did is good for me and my team or not?, then sometimes i regret with my decision i made when i relize that the decision is not good for my team, because good decision is when our team agree with that decision, is not it?, then good decision will make our team more solid and easy to work with teamwork, then i also think how i can be better tomorrow, thinking about what i have to improve, thinking what i have to do to make good person when make decision.
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Hi Dedy!
When you have leisure time, you can manage some times to read and comment more, get involved here and make friendship to improve your English skill.
Hope to see you around! Keep it up and happy learning! :)
Hello Dedy! Thanks for sharing a part of your life and it is awesome!
I find some grammar mistakes but to be honest, I am not really good on grammar as well :D
But maybe I will try to help you some of the mistakes:
"Hy all member english club, my name is Dedy Setiawan, and i'm indonesian, tonight i just want to write what i want to write, please correct me when you find the mistakes on my blog, especialy on grammar, please show me where is it, and what should sentence to be, ok i'm a worker i'm a project admint, here i just to share what i usually do at my office and at my bourding house after office hours."
I think it is better to use (.) for each sentence than (,) cause it ends up with a very long sentence.
indonesia => Indonesia
especialy => especially
admint => admin
bourding => boarding (I think it seems like dormitory)
"Please show me where is it" => please show me where IT IS (cause it is not a question)
Well maybe I can suggest you that the typing mode here has been set up to detect our wrong spelling (by showing us the red line under the word). So you must check it on google translate/dictionary to get the right spelling.
That is all I can say! Good luck to learn English!
OK thanks for all responses, after office hours let's discus about the topic of my blog, to make me better and to share about what you want to share, because your comment is very important to make our team better. have nice day...
Hi, Dedy Setiawan!
Have you ever heard about synergy?
You are trying to improve yourself and the whole team, that's great!
You are on a right way!
Keep improving! :)
Hi Dedy! Teamwork is extremely important. It seems to me it is good to think about the decisions we make every day. However, if one day we find out that those decisions were bad, it is good as well because we can learn from them. Making mistakes is a way that we have to get experience.
On the other hand, if we know our weaknesses it will be easier to turn them into strengths.
Finally, I agree with you: we should improve day by day to be beter persons.
Benar benar Dedy! That was exactly what my friend Pedro meant. The work of the team and the soul of the team that count. In your office, you need to organize and unite your work with your team. Neymar was a little bit selfish which cost us the loss of the world cup, according to my friend PGM. Could I be one of your friends? Thanks.
It's a very good start keep blogging . I am not that professional grammarian :)
However , u have some mistakes in grammar and in using words I mean some words aren't used as native use them . Nevertheless , u have wrote and expressed ur self clearly u have the ability to communicate in English and let me tell u that making mistakes is a healthy sign of learning . I make many mistakes every time I blog here or comment for other members . I might come back soon to show u what's wrong in ur blog because I am busy now . But , I am not that good in it :)