- Hey dear ! Do you hear me ? Do you really understand me ? Can you realize what I think about you ? Can you feel my heartbeats ? May be sometimes you don't. Because if you really do that you can't hurt me. You can't hit me . You can't let me bleeding in my heart . It is true that in this cruel world it is difficult to love anyone blindly. But I don't know why my idiot mind ask blind love from you ? But you know as a true love can't I aspect some love from you ? Can't I able to hear that you love me . I don't care what is going on in this world. I don't care what the people think about me. I just care about you. But why don't you care about me ? Am I wrong ? Did I fail to win your heart ? But I promise I will never give up. I won't stop to love to you . My concentration to you will never be stopped. I will be loving you all the time all the moment.
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Thanks Onee-chan, Love comes natural and the expression of love may be comes naturally. Keep in touch.
Woww! It's a firm love. Sometimes, love comes without permission. I wish we never hurt by this love. See the probability and reality. Good luck then! :)
I like your writing style, so natural. Nice blog!
Thanks Alice E
Unrequited love is hard to sustain. I hope you have the will to hold on. :)
Thanks Expector Smith , I have edited the mistakes . Thanks for your nice suggestion .
Queen Dyan Sugianto thanks, it is an expression what I have tried to show here .
MaYa Thanks for your wishes.
AReality Thanks for your advice.
We can't make a person to love us the way we love him/her, we can learn anything in this world but we can't teach a heart to love someone whom they don't feel anything special. That's why it's called "falling in love / fell in love" as it's unpredictable. Just be thankful you crossed paths. It's so nice that you shared what's inside of you, i hope all guys are like that. God Bless!
Good!
It sounds like you were talking about a love story. You wrote in such a unique writing style.
By the way, could you try to fix the sentences below?
1. 'You can't let me bedding in my heart.'
2. 'Did I failed to win your heart ? '
There are also some typos in your blog, such as 'here me', 'hart me', 'Can't I able...' --Tips: try to proofread your blog before you publish it.
I hope it helps, and hope to read more blogs by you!
Your are right .We should not give up. Thanks a lot .
Nice one, worth to read it. We can't have everything that we want in this life, but hope dies last. Don't give up!