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Posted by bet on October 11, 2015

I wanted to hear your whispers

Wanted to say something

Wanted to savor my morning coffee

With you.

wanted to dance,

Wanted to explore many things;

And, till now want to do the same things

Just with you and for-ever.

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bet October 13, 2015 11:22

Thanks, arif, ratu sis, Noor and Misha. Really happy to see you all.
Mishaikh October 13, 2015 11:11

I wanted to hear your whisper,
to feel the ticklish of your warm breath.
I wanted to say something
to make you feel what I feel while hearing your whisper
I wanted to dance in joy to explore the life by your side
just with you forever!.

This is not a correction.
★RaTu★●•٠·˙ October 13, 2015 10:44

Sister...I want to be a part of your morning, with coffee and a slice of last night dream....sharing the sweet and bitter feeling, hehehe th anks for sharing
Arif October 12, 2015 15:05

May everything (good) you want come true! :)
ELF-Noor October 12, 2015 4:35

really nice and lovely poem.. I liked it

keep writing..thanks for sharing..
bet October 12, 2015 4:17

oh..so many nice comments! I just opened my computer and found it, thanks everyone for your inspiring comments. Honestly I feel the urge to write more when I find you reading my lowly poems.
Expector Smith October 12, 2015 0:19

I keep wanting

Do you want the same as me

Honey

I want

...
Ameur October 11, 2015 17:59

My friend,I like that ,Simple words deep meaning,keep writing..

Thanks.
Mishaikh October 11, 2015 15:22

ann keep practicing consistently. You will also be able to put your thought in words (English). Everyone here is a student.
Mishaikh October 11, 2015 15:10

Very nice peice of poetry. Good work Afro. Keep trying.