Wanted

Wanted to look back

Wanted to see again

There was smile, forced and fake.

Wanted to ask

There was tears, unseen!

Darkness engulfed everything.

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  • Thanks @ Misha...and @ Alice...for your nice and inspiring comments!

  • tears unseen... the saddest part is when no one can understand our pain and we are left alone to face our grief.  Beautiful words to show a longing lost!  Thanks for the share!

  • How painful it is! Only a sensitive heart can feel, but I agree with the comments of Expector.

    Very impressive.

  • Thanks, dara and fay.

    Yes, smith....there is laughter enormous!

  • Then comes the dawn

    There is the sunshine

    A new day ahead

    Full of laughter instead of tear

    ...

  • please add more something

  • Teeka assay Afro. Donnobad! Those lines of poems reminded me of that late handsome actor, Giuliano Gemma's Wanted during the sixties.

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