Waiting for the day..
Life is stuck
Not able to move on
Even to go back
What to do
Oh, Nothing is clear
Everything fading out of my sight
Dark sky, Surrounding foggy things
I can't make difference
My head is full of pain
I can't stand ON the ground
Hold my hand, hold my hand
Show me the way to out
Oh! I am alone
Everybody is beside me
They love me
But only I know
How much I feel lonely inside
My head is spinning
Dying inside.
Something is breaking in me Each moment.
Oh! am I losing hope
No, oh no! This should not happen
I should be hopeful always
The day will come, when
Happiness catches me again
My ways will be Clear
The Sky will be blue and clear
Waiting for that Day....
By Elf(3/8/2017)
Just a poem, Just my Thoughts
Comments
#Dear Robbie:
thanks for Wishing me good things and blessings...
I hope for the good too, Hope I day I will get what I want.. :p
#saba:
What a great suggestion....:)
#kanimozhi:
Glad to see you here..: )
Agree with you dear..
stay blessed..
#Marshaa:
Welcome Dear..
Nice lines when we have depressed that time even everybody with us also we feel lonely but we should learn something for that moment without losing hope goes forward.
The day will come, when
Happiness catches me again
My ways will be Clear
The Sky will be blue and clear
Waiting for that Day....
I like these nice lines. ALL IS WELL.
Nice poem!
When we feel alone, it is better to show our love to others, then we are not alone anymore.
Welcome back, dear Elf-Noor! It's nice to hear that this poem was just in your thoughts. But I still wish you all the good things and blessings. Stay positive! :)
#AG:
LOL, SMILES..!!!
Human's life have two parts sadness and happiness.. so nobody can be happy all the time,^_^
I will try to write joke..:P thanks for such a caring comment.. ^_^
stay around us in myEC,
#Icha:
Am really Glad to see You active here...
You comment and suggestions really encouraging...
#Kal:
Oh so sweet of You... yeah I also like the last part specially hope in the end..
stay happy...
thanks for encouraging..
#Seeker:
Agree with you,
Happiness and sadness both is part of life...
I am glad to have your point of view..
#Estanis:
Thanks for guiding.. ^_^
I am trying to follow my wishes... !!
stay blessed..
#Dear Rose:
I am really glad that you liked my poem..
we should always be hopeful for future.. and think good that something good will happen.. ^_^
yeah, sad person can write good poem, agree with you..
thanks for your precious comment..
Hi Elf,
I have to confess that I am not too easy absorbing the content of poem sometimes. But I understood well the content of yours well. I felt sadness there. Feeling lonely among many people around us. We often felt like that, and I think it is normal because we are human being. The point that I want to say is the same like the previous comments from other members. So, never lose our hope, we always have choice to be happy or sad. We are decision maker of our life.
Thanks for sharing with us the nice poem from you.
Dear Elf,
Heart touching poem.Very nice written!
I should be hopeful always
The day will come, when
Happiness catches me again
My ways will be Clear
The Sky will be blue and clear
Waiting for that Day!
I love those words.Be patient with hopes for that day.Many thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts!
Well done dear!
Dear ELF-noor, I like your poem very much, it's an emotional poem with deep meaning. Sometimes we feel lonely among many people. It's melancholic mood but at the end of your poem is hope ...
You know? We don't like that feeling when we have the impression our life stucks and nothing is going on. But in this mood we have our best ideas to write poems. It seems we need it to listen deep inside our soul to recognize ourselves. Because we force ourselves to express our feeling through words we see clear at the end.
Thanks for sharing.
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