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  • Majed Alsolmi November 10, 2014 17:49

    Hey Ehsan, thanks for you nice comment on my sentence . I would let you know that using "them" instead of that structure is okay but might sound general. And i meant to make it more specific and expressive. I don't mean that I  only should wait to see them pass by but want them "BACK" to my life.

  • Majed Alsolmi November 10, 2014 17:42

    Thanks Mishaikh and Ehsan for your comments.

  • Mishaikh November 3, 2014 10:30

    Let me repeat one of my trnslations:

    O CROW WHEN I DIE EAT ALL OF MY BODY. PECK EACH AND EVERY PARTICLE OF MY FLASH

    BUT DO NOT EAT MY EYES. THERE IS STILL AND WILL ALWAYS BE HOPE TO SEE MY BELOVED.

  • Ehsan November 3, 2014 7:14

    I think "them" is a better fit for your sentence rather than "their"

    For whom are you waiting? :)

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