Unweeded Garden

UNWEEDED GARDEN

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Who is gifted with the life?

Don’t have a tale of so nice.

Many are killed before they  have a start,

All feelings get buried in their heart.

Come they shout against the light,

No reality within their world of its height.

Many have tried to close their eyes,

Because when they open tend to realize.

Stereotypes are being so much idealized,

And I have seen this division on every side.

What has happened with this world?

Which is turning into back and white

We have a world with plastic shade,

Where men are bought with coined fate.

You think you are here, quite all on your own,

You are one of a billion, another sad clone.

Now the flam of fire have turned into gyre,

Filthy men are easy for the buyer.

Still, they are calling themselves men of God!

To put back His command to their end.

A mask of lies is getting to ride

Everymen are dooming with their pride.

We are riding on this train with our will,

As we have eager for dying thrill.

  • The world is turning into a wild gyre,

Where men have burnt their morale into the fire.

Where Justice has become truly blind,

And his final piece is left unsigned.

She has vanished all his imputes,

And undisclosed, for now, she’s mute.

 

(ROYAL FALCON)

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  • Beautifully written!

    Well Done!

    Thanks for sharing!

  • hi Paula,

    thanks a lot for having your time to read my blog and making your best suggestion,,,,, actually it is my initial stage and m doing my best in this regard,,,,,n hope so i will be able to overcome all my faults,,,,,,,,, 

    thank u once again for ur such good response

  • Hi SNR, 

    Thank you so much for your such great appreciation regarding my blog,,,,,n I have no word to pay you in this highly motivation response,,,,,n I have tried my best to put forward my voice of my heart,,,

    thank you once again,,,,:D 

  • Falcon the thing is.....yes a few mistakes are there but it does not stop the meaning of your poem.  It is a good poem and it is a true one.  Sad to say.  Good job!!!  I really liked it.

  • Hi Rose,

    first of all i would like to pay my special thanks for your such highly motivational remarks on my blog........,,,,,, Actually i have tried my best to put forward my thought as effective as i can ,,,, maybe my poem is faultful but it bears a deep meaning , which provoke our world of imagination,,,,

    thank u once again ,,,,ROSE

  • Your poem is so meaningful, sad but true. Your poem is like a picture that you hold us like a mirror in front of our face. Can we see ourselves and are we responsible for how we as humans are, and how the world is? Everyone has to answer this question himself.
    You wrote short sentences with the power of poetry. That's the art of writing.

    Keep writing, don't stop!

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