After being inspired from the poem written by Rose De Leon and published by Fr@nk on EC, I have written mine. I am looking forward to knowing your viewpoints how I did my job.
I forgave you whenever you disheartened;
Gave you warm welcome when you returned
But you gave me tears and pains in return;
At my sorrowful feeling you made so much fan.
You have broken my trust two times;
When you were caught of two-timing two times
I never miss you when you depart;
I have dislodged you from my heart.
Since deception you are nothing in my life;
I changed my decision to make you my wife.
Two-time means to carry on a romantic relationship with two people at the same time
Comments
Please don't scratch my old gashes by asking me how much she made fun at my lugubrious feeling :(
However, the decision is appreciated that makes me feel happy :). If you don't two-time, you must be mindful lady. I mean the lady who possess mind lol
Two-time is also verb, you can use it without "do" :). You told me you always confused classification of word in what parts of speech it falls.
Thank you so much for appreciating my poetic skill. I feel relieved :)
Simply wonderful poem! :)
My dear bro, what do you mean by this sentence...
"At my sorrowful feeling you made so much fan."
So, she's not his(your) wife yet. :D Okay, I appreciate your decision. :D I admit that many girls now do two-time, excluding me, okay. LOL....
My decision not "was" but is correct.
Btw this word is also new to those who two-time. Thank for encouragement. :)
Your decision was correct, Arif. :)
It's a nice poem and two-time is a new term to me. Thanks for teaching it to me.