One day a poor guy went to a book stall to buy a book.All the salesmen were busy with other customers.In the mean time this poor guy stole a pen from the display.When he got back home his tutor was waiting for him for his tution class.The tutor ask the guy,Nice pen where did you buy.Guy got little bit excited and told the truth.The tutor adviced him and told,you have done a very big wrong thing,stealing is not a good habit,salesmen might not be looking at you but the God is always looking at us.so you have to accept the wrong and return the pen to the shop.This poor guy understood the advices of tutor and went back to the shop to return the pen to the salesman.The salesman was very happy by seeing this poor guys honesty and gifted his personal use pen to this poor guy.when he got back home his tutor was at home with a small gift.what a surprise tutors gift also the same pen wich writes in another colour.PLEASE IF ANY MISTAKES,CORRECTIONS ARE WELCOME.
yes, advice is same in plural form but we can say a piece of advice, two pieces of advice, three pieces of advice. And, we can say, give him few words of advice.
Thank you Onee,When you are here why should I get scared.Onee how can I do the corrections.The problem is I used to sing in from my phone.Our officePC we can't youse for personal work.Anyway ill try to do the corrections.
It's great to share this story. It's interesting and you have an important message here. HONESTY.
Expector is right. You need a space between two sentences. It's a good way to write.
......with a small gift.whatgift. What a surprise.... (and also for other sentences...)
My correction with my limited abilitity:
~ The tutor asked the guy, "Nice pen. Where did you buy?". (you need to give this punctuation in dialogue, for the proper writing. I think it makes the writing more interesting)
~ This poor guy understood the advicesadvice of tutor (advice: for plural and single)
~ The salesman was very happy by seeing this poor guy
~ tutorstutor's gift ...
Nimzaf,, after you got the correction, we hope to see you edit your blog soon. Thank you for your consideration. Great job! :)
Re corrections: You should capitalize the first word of every sentence, and you need a space between two sentences. So, can you spot the capitalization and punctuation mistakes in this: "...with a small gift.what a surprise tutors gift also the same pen wich writes in another colour."
to be honest, every one has shch an experience which did wrong things cause of various complex reasons, but should be remember to "return the pen back to right place" and you are also a good guy! positive story.thanks
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That's right, Afro. We can also say some advice. Thank you for paying attention. :)
yes, advice is same in plural form but we can say a piece of advice, two pieces of advice, three pieces of advice. And, we can say, give him few words of advice.
Nimzaf,,
It's great to share this story. It's interesting and you have an important message here. HONESTY.
Expector is right. You need a space between two sentences. It's a good way to write.
......with a small gift.what gift. What a surprise.... (and also for other sentences...)
My correction with my limited abilitity:
~ The tutor asked the guy, "Nice pen. Where did you buy?". (you need to give this punctuation in dialogue, for the proper writing. I think it makes the writing more interesting)
~ This poor guy understood the advices advice of tutor (advice: for plural and single)
~ The salesman was very happy by seeing this poor guy
~ tutors tutor's gift ...
Nimzaf,, after you got the correction, we hope to see you edit your blog soon. Thank you for your consideration. Great job! :)
Thanks dear for your supporting comment.
a thought-provoking story!
Re corrections: You should capitalize the first word of every sentence, and you need a space between two sentences. So, can you spot the capitalization and punctuation mistakes in this: "...with a small gift.what a surprise tutors gift also the same pen wich writes in another colour."
Hope you get it!
to be honest, every one has shch an experience which did wrong things cause of various complex reasons, but should be remember to "return the pen back to right place" and you are also a good guy! positive story.thanks