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  • Mr Bob,
    Thanks for correcting...
    this really matters and helps and is much appreciated!

  • May I make a suggestion Charan? Breath is probably the noun you want instead of the verb breathe. I like your poem but think the "e " on the end of breath must be an accident.
    Thank you so much for sharing your writing.
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