one day i decided travel from iran to iraq i didnot have enough money to buy airplane ticket so i buy bus ticket always it takes from 14-16 Hours. when i arrived to terminal to buy my ticket i took last ticket and Driver was beside me
he said : come to go we didn't have enough timeز
I wondered at this time because every time We travel by Bus We Proceed at 7 pm but in this time he wanted to Proceed 11 am.
i got in Bus and saw one man and two wamen and the drivers . suddenly he start our trip but the bus was empty except 4 persons.
i sat in the first chear beside aman and tow wamen sat in other hand .
i asked him : where are other travelers?
he said they are in other city and before we go to the main path for our travel we have to take them then we will go .
This was not a legal actionز!ز
tow girl was frightened. i great them and aman that he sat beside me and told them iam from iraq and my name caro .
the name of man was Ali and he was Persian .
they girls were warda and Bfra the were Kurds.
the drivers i will call them A and B there were iranain.
from Behavior of them they plan to do something .
i asked driver A what about our travelers are them from iran ?
He said :
no they are from India ?
i said : you don't kidding with me, yes ?
he said they are from India i didn't kidding with arabic person , he want to insult me but i keep my coolness.
the driver B was a teenager and he wanted to be rude with girls
but girls somehow ignoring him .
the time for arrival to the city take always 1 hour but we arrived after 2:30 hours and the Bus was stopped .
and driver A said :
we will stopped here after our travelers arrived, they wiil arrived after 10 munite . and he said don't get off from Bus i became angry and call him we don't get off from BUS ?!the driver B teenager man said : don't be rude .
i and told the girls and man to get off and have lunch
this is just fool man .
Bfra her tears was dawing and cry
she said iam very afraid from this drivers .
I told she I will stay with her and iam stand by to help her
Ali was big man and he started to become friend with the drivers he was adepmatic man but i not .
the time was sunsat and the india travelers didn't come
and we waited for 3 hours .
suddenly two bus stopped beside our bus and many travelers get off from two Bus and come to our Bus.
their dresses didn't indicate they was from India !!
and the drivers harded we to get off from BUS untill new travelers get in !!
we give them a money of our ticket and now can not find any bus for take we to the border or to returan back to terminal .
Ali asked me to be patient for some second
Warda and Bfra Cried .
at this time i can not do anything just waiting . 5 munite left the driver come beside me and told me he will deel with this problem after president of caravan go .
then we understanded they Chairs was sold for this caravan. but we couldn't say anything. after one hour we stated and we sat in our chair in bus but the men other chair upset from we he wanted to kick .
i understood all person in this caravan were from Pakistan
aren't from India and they wanted to go karbala city this is my family city and i was going to this city i told them in english because the didnot speak Persian language.
one of this Pakistan ask me to tell the driver he have to stop because he wanted to go toilet (wc).
i translated this for driver , driver said he going to stop after 30 munite .but one hour left he didn't stop.
he asked me to tell the driver to stop . i asked him again but he didn't stop. after this time the Pakistan traveler became angry and told me to translate this sense for the driver . ( if he do not stop the Bus after 5 munite he will .
he will empty his bladder on the drivers chair.
haahha i become so so happy and told the two fool driver about this.
i and ali and two girl Warsda and Bfra became friends
and we decided to take information about drivers life i will tell you my friend about this travel one of strongly travel in my life .
plz porden me i have most mistakes in my english
i hope you engoy with this story and if this is possible for you plz corrrect my mistakes grammer thank you for reading
i will write the end of this story in another day
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Comments
Dear Caro,,
You really have a great story as always. I got the point of your writing. It's interesting blog, I'm serious. I'm looking forward to read the end of this story. I hope nothing bad would happen to you and your friends.
For suggestion, you can try to fix your punctuation first, especially "dot (.)" and "comma(,)". This is the most important thing to convey the message that you want to tell.
Keep learning and practicing! I'm sorry for just reading it. Have a nice day, Caro! :)
Glad nothing untoward incident happened to you and all the other passengers.
Observation:-
You need to check your spelling. Maybe use a 'spell check'. In addition, try to re-read your post, again and again, even after you've posted it. Do some editing.
Good luck.
You need to correct the entire text, grammar, spelling, all. Keep practicing.
Hello caro, nice story. Have you reread your writing?
Caro you have many mistakes but i got the point! I only can tell you to use capital letter after every dot and in names of countries and cities and try to separate your blog in paragraphs not in so many lines. I hope that other members will make more corrections, because i am not good at English too :) Keep writing and reading blogs!