To day,
When I was sitting
Thinking of u again
But
This time It wasn’t Like before
You Remember
What I said
I pretended
I wished I prayed
I promised
I waited
My passion
My attachment with u
You said at once
Was ‘Fake’
Cool
You took Lot of time
To prove me Like many others, But
I kept you Very special
On every single moment
You were Every thing for me
Even I said
You are my love
My life
It was Fake, it was Fake (oh, my God)
God bless you
Give you as many happiness
As you wish and wanted
What I will do of my life
As of now
It’s all yours
As it was
I ask for
and pray God to give you
My life too
To live you long With
whom You are
Take care!
Comments
one more thing,
ur color combination in ur poem really makes me surprise
Hi Zaibi,
its really a master piece of realistic poem,,,,,u have done ur great in ur poem
its really make the reader to be uplifted into the world of imagination,,,,,,
we wish u all the best !! 4 ur more fabulous poems
And thanx a lot for sharing this one
Thanks Tsovik ,,,for sharing your emotions with us,,,you are right,,,every one can not have same thoughts but at least must go for efforts to achieve what he / she can.
An example of real love. Nowadays, there are too few cases of real love than when reading such a poem, really feel, that love can still be. True love is without and conditions and even without requiring mutual feelings. An example of that we saw here. It is nice and it is appreciable. But.....it is so difficult, and not every person is able to that. It's pity that that girl didn't love that man but....it's heart.....
Best Regards
What a desperate situation you have described in your poem. The author might be wondering what made his love turn away from him?.. And the answer coming inevitably to mind is simple: absence of the mutual understanding and as a result - the trust deficit...
But however, I think, those who don't appreciate our feelings towards them and who hurt us without thinking twice are NOT worth grieving over them so deeply.
Best regards.
its kindda a sad poem but u wrote it in rainbow colors....intresting right??
Thanks Teko,, sure i will try my best
it is nice poem .. i recommend you to continue read as much as you can for the greatest writers of poems to learn more and then improve your poem's writing skills.
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