I with my familiy went on a short trip to the seashore..it's about 100 km from my home...
we start 9 am in the morning from the house to the seashore..and we arrived at 12.20 pm..
we visited my wife's uncle and had lunch at his house...then we went to the beat together
I felt so happy to see my kids so exiceted being on the seashore.
we went home at 7 pm ...ant finally arrived at home at 10 pm...it was exghausted,,,yet i felt so happy..
but..unfortunately my son could not sleep after that...he stayed awake until 2 am,,,ohh...
i asked him to sleep...he said that he was hungry....when i open the rice warmer....there is no rice left
so...we just ate a cuple of buiscuits.....and finally he slept after eating the biscuits...
sorry ,,,my english is not so good
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thanks guys for commenting and correcting...
i really apreciate it
A good attempt didi. Keep it up. You tried to write in separate sentences. It is ok, but you can also make it a para/paras out of it.
You have used tenses correctly.
English is a proper noun so avoid to write in lowercase, like 'english'.
Good work.
It is ok, didi rahman Your blog is good! I imagined you with your family on the sea beach, and your happy kids) Good job! You made your family happy! And you english is not so bad at all:) Thank you for sharing!