Lord, how I hate myself for not loving you!!!
How can a miserable creature like me
walk on the soil your angelic feet touched??
how gross! How immensely profane and sacrilegious
that I still breathe the air that gorgeous you
breathed out!!!!
I desire with all my heart to scrape
the memory of you
from the walls of my intestines
yet I cannot bring myself to commit
such an unimaginable blasphemy
no, no...not you, you are the blue sky
over the green fields where love grows!
Drunken with the lack of love
I stumble through thorny shrubs on the way to
the castle you live
hoping and doubting, eager yet undecided
like in a malignous nightmare
I endeavour to force my rogue soul
to accept your existance
I try to persuade myself, silly me
how wonderful this global warming could be
were I capable of bringing myself
to embrace you, whisper sweet
little words into the pink shell
of your ear.
How normal and casual it would be,
Should we just make a date
and tell
how much we mean to each other!!
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Hey, Rys,
Amm, I don't know... Something is telling me, you have described your love to a woman instead of Lord.
And the whole poem immerses me in a silent and mysterious atmosphere of a thriller movie :D Thorny shrubs; castle where the best and most desirable thing or creature lives; fields where love grows. Mysterious and interesting! Exactly what I like!
And those words in bold, I don't know what most of them are refering to, but the idea is great! Especially reminding about global warming.
Ryyyyysssss!
I have no words to say anything. It's just awesome. I felt like i was reading a poem by a professional poet. I still struggle to comprehend poems easily however i could feel you have expressed your love for the Lord.
Keep writing n thanks for new words i learnt from this writing. :))
I can't say anything else than only
Words of love which testify your life experience.
>>>how gross! How immensely profane and sacrilegious - that I still breathe the air that gorgeous you - breathed out!!!! <<<
Damn right you are!! :-DD
>>>How normal and casual it would be, - Should we just make a date - and tell - how much we mean to each other!! <<<
I like this so much. Great writing, rysperski. Thx for sharing. ;-))
Mille grazie, white thing, I immediately rectified my immensely misspelled expression...:-)
The great way of confessing the flaws before the Almighty God, but I believe you could write it even better. I felt spiritual reading it.....I am glad to see you writing poetry
Wonderful, Backed with colored words , to take attantion of the readers ...!!.. A good work ...This sounds me a Hymn !...(immesly ??? )...
Nice poem Rys, I love it... Thanks for sharing this .