The Time I Said Stop
written by: MARIE LORABELLE F. REBOYA
Stop using me & imitating me,
when I decided to stop
please do your best shot till it last.
Make up your mind
and decide one.
It is over & stop using my name
don't make me feel lame.
Stop being a selfish,
please decide now &
start to accomplish.
I was relaxing & patiently waiting,
until you came just to ruin everything.
All of us were in chaos,
& now were both confuse.
I said to stop,
& listen to my feelings.
I stop believing & fighting,
and all words needs an ending.
Actions speaks well,
words can also moves the hill
If you use all your words well
maybe your passions is not
at all waste imaginations.
I want to stop, and win you back,
& I was haunted in a mock.
I wish all these words would whisper
your heart, mind, body & soul .
When the time I said stop
is also the time I punished myself, but
I am glad I am over from calling you "buttercup".
Comments
Darius its a song but i don't know how to put tone.
That's great !!!!!
Bravo !!!!
JP_TP you love poems. You don't like health matters most corner?
the Way to the Moon
you can say; Marie I enjoy reading.
Nimzaf , usra riasat , seed thanks for your comments.
good try
Please press like everyone.
Thanks Negi
nice poem