The tale of the cockscomb flower

As the Noas's suggestion, I translated this folk tale of the cockscomb flower into English. 

Once upon a time, every chicken had a beautiful red comb. One early morning, a hen looked at herself in a pond and felt so happy with the red comb which look like a bunch of flower in her head. She excitingly and happily clapped her wings and sang the chicken's conventional song "cook a doodle doo, my comb has grown".

All creatures turned to look at her and praised : "Wow, what a pretty comb, you look so nice".

She went around to look for something to eat. When she went by a water tank, suddenly she heard someone crying quietly. She bended her head and blinked her eyes and listened carefully. Oh well there was a purple tree crying alone. The hen was so joyful and contented, her friend's sorrow made her ambarrassed. She hurriedly ran toward her friend, asking attentively:

- What has happened with you?

Teardrops as pure as morning dew were falling continuously into its root, the tree said:

- Every tree around here has pretty flowers except me.

And the tree bursted into tears again, her tears dropped a lot. The hen tried to comfort her as much as possible but it didn't work. After thinking for a little while, finally she made here mind:

- I will give you my beautiful red comb, is it ok?

The tree became so excited, shouting:

- Really? Is it real? Thank you so much.

Next day morning, people got surprised as the beautiful red comb in the hen's head had dissapeared. Meanwhile the tree nearby the water tank blossomed an identical bunch of red flower. The tree told every one about the kindness of the hen. Since then the tree has been called the tree of the cockscomb flower. And a new tiny comb has grown in the hen's head.

 

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  • Ha Nguyen, you come to the point already, thanks for your support.

  • There are lessons to learn from in every tale and this one is about kindness, about giving what we can to make others happy :)

    This is a beautiful translation, April; thanks a lot for sharing!

  • Nida, I'm glad you like the tale  :) it was told by my mom since I was just a little girl.

  • Such a cute tale it is, April!

    Thank you so much for translating it in English. I loved it. :)

  • Thank you Nimzaf for dropping by and leaving nice comment here.

    My dear friend Estanis, I didn't know you were so jealous all the time... :PP

  • Wow! Great storyteller :D

    I can imagine your kids listening to your tales on their beds before falling asleep (I'm so jealous, lol)
    Btw, many people should learn from this hen.

    NICE!!
  • Nice story,excellent .
    Thanks for sharing.keep writing good luck.
  • Thanks Noah for your interesting idea. It's my motivation to do it. Mostly I'm tooo lazyyyy :D

    Modaway, your kind words always are  great encouragement, thank you.

    Ratu, nice to see you hear, my friend and thanks for your support.

  • April, thanks for sharing such a nice story

  • Wow! Thank you so much for your effort in translating the folks story into English. I love it. 

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