At that time I did not know that it was the last day I spoke to her.She was uncharacteristically, she hided her smile, her laughter and jokes. I came to her when she asked me .
" You know, she started talking, I felt this was my last day to see you". She looked at me .
I gasped how could she say that. I tried to tell her that she would definitely be okay.
She said,"You are a friend that I like most among the other friends, you most understand me ".
I tried to understand her grief, understand her fears, understand the disappointment she felt .
"You have to be tough," I told her. Instead you said you would go to a country that you wanted to go to meet the man who you love".
She shook her head,"No, I will meet him in the heaven". Then she closed her eyes and said,"I'm tired and I want to sleep, convey my regards to your brother and don't forget to prepare a lot roses for me, I will need them in a few days".
I flinched back, but I realized soon that she did not want to talk anymore. I went home with a sad heart , my friend who was usually joking and laughing, she was no longer like that. And it turned out it was the last day I spoke to her. A week later, her sister told me she has passed away. Good bye my best friend , my prayers are always with you .
(Teachers, learners ,give corrections ,please)
Comments
Learner, it's real and I am not a good writer or good thinker. Thank you
Ehab,thank you. I will put my comment if I have much free time
Mickey, I am sorry, I don't mean to remind you about her, she is my best of the best friends I have ever got
Hello
It's not bad but make sure of your computations .
thank you .
can you comment on my blog about your flag in your country ?
You made me think of her...
Thank you, YN. For the corrections. It helps me a lot
Tara, thank you. I will be carefully from now
Seeker, thank you. I really hope you can give the corrections
Thank you very much Noaslpls. This is my first time writing a story. I will pay attention much to the punctuation
Great story! There is so much emotion in your writing.
Thanks for sharing such important punctuation tips, Noaslpls! Formatting is very important. It improves readability.
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