She was a complete stranger to me. I never met her before nor did I see. This was the first single moment when we both stared into each other's eyes. Whole of me was shuddered. Frozen on the very spot I stood watching. Next moment she broke the stare, turned her face and moved away.
Sometimes two strangers unfeelingly have binding in an unexpected moment. They get tied in a knot just in that moment. May be I and she passed through that moment leaving behind the memory of the ‘nexus’!
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@Lady Anne
How lucky I am, my emotional moment caught your eyes after a very long pause.
Modifications have been made as nicely advised.
Thanks m'lady.
What a moving encounter! Probably she disturbed your tranquil emotion and sent a vortex of intense feeling to your heart.
This kind of encounter is not a thing to be wondered at anymore. The eyes of a human being always lust for the beauty that beholds them.
By the way, "I and she" doesn't sound euphonic, does it? ("She and I" or simply "We" are commonly used.)
Some minor errors are:
She was a complete stranger to me.
Frozen on the very spot, I stood I was seeing ("watching" is preferable) her.
This was the first single moment when we both stared into each other's eyes. of our eyes stare each other.
Thanks saba for your appreciation.
Nice blog, Thanks :)
@Afro
It doesn't happen often. It is rare and 'the memory is not false!
Thanks for your comments.
@ Barbare - setareh:
I am glad that the MOMENT caught your eyes.
It is a mixture of nice and weird feeling!we may meet someone with whom we feel a connection but in reality it does not exist at all. But, the moment, the memory is not false. Something like a good poetry which could be described in many ways by different people.It maybe a state of human mind which is the most weird thing in this world.
Thanks Hayah for your appreciation.
'Versatile' you may mean Hayah rather than nimble. Thannnnnnnnnkkssssssssss a lot!
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