The girl in straw hat.

Sitting on the beach
near the sea 
under the sun
with grains of sand
and saltiness on the skin
she touches her hat
smiling. Then
with serene thought
she lookes down.
Half-cut hair
black, disordered
and still wet:
it seems the effect of
a gel touch.
She's beautiful!
Simply beautiful!

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  • wao....I like her too and the way you described her, when I was reading I felt the easiness and simplicity of your writing, keep it up!

  • Hi Vindos!

    I like her too! :)

    Because of the way, you described her!

    And I want to sit on the beach too! :/

  • Hi Olga, thank you for pointing out my distraction

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