She looks whole and fine outside
But i can feel the emptiness inside of her
She looks cool and strong outside
But i feel the brokenness inside of her
Her soul cries out with heartsick of lamentations
And it left some grave cutlets in to my heart
Why do i feel so broken to see her?
I reach out my hand to help
But she resists and just wouldn't reach back
I enclose myself to embrace and confort her
But she just keeps pulling to one side
Eschewing my mercy
As if she was the strongest person on Earth
If only i couldn't feel your pain girl...
I would have just walked away...
Even though i tried not to care at all
Your soul keeps calling out to me
...
If only i could deafen my ears from your cries
Or seel my eyes from your brokenness
#sighing
...
She goes on to the place which lead to her death..
Adding more cutlest to her bloody scars
And again the pain reaches to me
Still when i come for healing
She spurns my leg-up
And the pain piled up
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Hi Chicky, thanks for your encouraging comment. I really appreciate.
I dont know what noona is. Nobody: noone. Maybe the right meaning for this name. (mine)
Well done! - keep your great work up
By the way, which one is right?
(Nobody = Noone) or (Nobody = Noona)? ;D ;D ;D
You are, lovely young lady. By the way, did you look at that dance?
Mr. Dara. What a comment? :D
Nobody can be able to pour emotions like that. Yes. Its me nobody. Nobody is able to do that. :D
Thank You so much for your positive comment. I feel like somebody now.
Nobody! No, you are somebody, because nobody can be able to pour those emotions like that. I like it. Thanks for sharing.
Hi Roman.
Thank You for sparing your time reading my blog.
Yes, you pointed it out, "HOPE" yes there is. And as long as we have this hope. We won't give up.
Once again. Thank you
:D :D
Hi SnR. Good joke
You are right, sometimes its better to let go. When everyone left and no one cares, someone has to make a difference. So she could feel her worth no matter how broken she is, she deserves to be loved.
Thank You very much for dropping bye and giving some great encouragement for me to write more. I really appreciate it.
Hi Nobody!
Sometimes there are situations, when we can't help our friends, relatives or beloved ones.
In such situations we feel the whole ruthlessness of the world.
But there should always be hope for the better!
Thank you for sharing your emotions!
Hi and thank You very much for your warm and encouraging comment Anum. I will try to write another ones. :)
your writing style is mesmerizing......Love the intensity of words......I am looking forward of your more work......
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