Would ya prefer to die because of fire?Your death will be quick, without any suffering and painYour soul will be burnt downLeaving only the ashes behindWhich are spread on the earthWould ya prefer to die because of ice?Your death will be slow and agonizingYour soul will be frozen, covered by lonelinessLeaving only one small ice cubeWhich will take your soul away foreverWhat about keep staying alive?Enjoying your lovely life with your relatives and palsBurning your soul with the fire of loveSharing your affection to them like the melting iceAnd being grateful to the God because you are still alivePerhaps, that's what every single person wantsCause I believe, nobody wanna die soon( I made this poem after reading one poem of Robert Frost entitled The Fire and Ice. I dedicate this poem to everybody in the world. Keep enjoying your life, even though your life is so hard because it is the greatest present you have from the God. You gotta believe that your life is valuable)Achan Malaka
Thanks so much, Skyandhill. Treasuring our life is extremely important. We should be aware that our life is the most precious thing we have ever got from the God.
Yeah, that's why I rarely write the new poem, because it's hard to get inspiration and the good theme. However, when finding a good inspiration, I'll strike it ;)
If you want to make your own, do not forget to tell me, dear.
Am I? hahaha..I think I am not a sensitive guy because sometimes I can be so stubborn. I am just an ordinary guy who tries to be a good man every time :). Composing a poem is not as easy as you think, dear. For instance, in making this one, I needed to rewrite every stanza ten times at the moment. You probably wanna make your own poem too to feel the same way :). About the poets, I believe they have their own secret to make poems. It probably can be the limitless inspiration, in which they always find their new inspiration whenever they want to make a poem
Thanks so much, dear Widya. Frost made a good poem and it made my head full of inspiration after reading his "Fire and Ice" at the moment. That's why I made this one.
Yes Bro, I don't wanna die soon. I still have much to do and I don't wanna die in vain. Don't forget to invite me again when you right another pretty poem as has been already.
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Yeah, that's why I rarely write the new poem, because it's hard to get inspiration and the good theme. However, when finding a good inspiration, I'll strike it ;)
If you want to make your own, do not forget to tell me, dear.
Am I? hahaha..I think I am not a sensitive guy because sometimes I can be so stubborn. I am just an ordinary guy who tries to be a good man every time :). Composing a poem is not as easy as you think, dear. For instance, in making this one, I needed to rewrite every stanza ten times at the moment. You probably wanna make your own poem too to feel the same way :). About the poets, I believe they have their own secret to make poems. It probably can be the limitless inspiration, in which they always find their new inspiration whenever they want to make a poem
Thanks you for lovely comment. We should appreciate our life, indeed
I will tell you if the latest poem of mine has been posted
Enjoy your day, man.
Wonderful poem dear brother.
Have a great day,
Lamegogo
Thanks so much for giving a nice comment....
Always miss ya
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