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  • Anele , If I delete the poem from the design , the design will be sufficient enough to express itself by itself .the eyes above will say

    (I have accumulated a treasury merits since I met you here. I become a poet and a writer , can express myself because I find my community and feel safety)

    You pictures speak clearly more than the poem . I love your pictures as much as you love my poem .you are great Anele , and  your friends should be poets to sing you nice songs and tell you amazing stories.
    Thank you very much Anele

  • Yas …..you are so clever. As I always expect you . she is the fifth season . She comes to add another years to his age .
    Thank you for sharing me you nice comment .

  • Really ! You thought that it came from the net?
    That means my poem is good ! You make me feel proud dear .I feel as if I am a real poet ,not just a simple learner.

    I think the significance of these lines comes from its sincerity .They are good for light that throws on inner of a sad man . A man sits rigid with bitterness . He shrinks a little from contact with his community . A man has been forced to live among them .Although he is differs from them . Your design depict this state .The eyes and tears and fallen leaves all these images are wonderful .

    Later on ,he meets his lover to change him ,to lift him form vanity . And you depict this state by paint a nice face of woman .

    I admire your design .You have endless good skills . When it comes to express my admiration for your personality , I become free from rigid or traditional fetters, because you always inspire me by endless nice thoughts , make me floating in the clouds of reverie .

    Thank you Anele .

  • Anele !!! Just (like it )….imm …what about my recitation?
    Anyway . thank you my dear.

  • Robbie,thank you again my dear friend.

  • Mitran , it is nice to see your comment in my page thank you very much for sharing me.

  • Hala , I like your quotation “" Keep love in your heart .A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead "
    - Oscar Wilde

    The poem contains the same conception , It talks about a man .He distances himself from his community. He feels as a stranger , an alone man , lives on fringes of life . His clock ticks towards target date . Eventually ,he sees the light at end of the tunnel .It is a light of hope and love . The optimism wishes come . Time is ripe for new dawn ,new starting . The love comes to tackle him from the circle of limbo . Although four season have gone but there is an auspicious season waits .The season will turn the clock back ,to gives that man life anew .

    Thank you very much dear .

  • Keira ,thank you dear for sharing me your nice comment .

  • You're very much welcome, dear friend! : )

  • Your poem reflects the deep meaning of love and life .The emotions of love brings out and develops the artistic and aesthetic nature of any person and leaves its impress upon our souls  to make us shine and be more creative .

    If people look deeply to their lives ,they will find that the moments when they have truly lived are the moments when they have done things in the spirit of love in general which can illuminate everything as you mentioned ...the roses ,the stars and the sun .... everything looks differently.

    " Keep love in your heart .A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead "

      - Oscar Wilde -

    Thank you Tawfeeq for sharing us this poem .The recitation and the design reflect the true meaning of the words .

    Best wishes dear!

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