The Existence of Mountains, Lampposts and Rainby Paisan LemsanUnderstand, I do understand.Mountains aren't moved from their places,but someone's been bringing lampposts here.While rain still falls here and anywhere.I know, but how should I do?Even though everything could be changed,such the crowd of birds should move to seek for their foods,then new creatures would come in place.There's no rain some year, but sometime heavy rain drown the roof.Someone tells me,there're many waves that we can't see in the sky and the air.(It might differ from new waves and underwater waves.)Amount of mountains here is constant,but amount of lampposts is increasing.While rain still falls here and anywhere.Translate from Thai poetryby Soraida
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I like that poem and your translation. There are a few small points you might correct, but the message is very clear.