Yesterday, my class had a party to celebrate the women day, it was a happy day for all class members.Prepare: the Monitor made an announcement to all boys in my class to make a plan for this party, so many ideals was brought out such as sing and dance, beer and candy, flower and gift...After many discussion, we decided our party would have these activities: sing, candy, flower and gift, and we would celebrate the women day one day before the 8th of March. It was yesterday - 7th of March.In the yesterday afternoon, the monitor and some boys went to flower market to buy flowers - roses, then went to super market anh bought some candies, gift, water, etc...- 5:30 pm we started class, our subject yesterday was psychology, the teacher was a funny man so he was easy to persuaded, he agreed for us to end class early and joining our party.- 6:30 pm party started, our class exploded the empty, quiet space with music and noise, they were all happy, first, the monitor made an announcement to celerbrate and the reason of this party, then our teacher gave his best wishes to all girls in class and all over the world, next he and four boys together sing a song, all smile...After the song of our teacher and boys, we had some fun questions for girls to answer, if someone answer correctly she would have a gift. so many questions and so many gifts, all smile...Our class also had a rule on the women day: All boys have to sing a song that girls request, one girl would choose a boy sing for her, before sing a song the boy had to give a best wish for the girl's chosen him, so many boys and so many songs, all smile...- 8:30 pm party over, all smile...Yesterday was a joyful day of our class, I would never forget this moment, I love my class very much, I love my friends very much...Today is the 8th of March, I wish all women in the world always joy, always smile and always happy...-----------------------------------HAPPY WOMEN's DAY--------------------------------------
In my view,it is not enough oneday for wmen to celebrate and it is supposed that all the days of the year will be celibation for wmen like men that all times are the same ,that means there is no oneday for them to celibrate.
Hi, It would be nice if we also had a day for men, too ^^
But think about this, on Women's day, if you're a good man, you can help your wife on houseworks,... but what about 364 (or 365) days left?
Hiz, I'm so upset because of my plan on this Sunday...
I agree with Expectorsmith on his comment. There are some mistakes in your passage including spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes. You should try to write short sentences in corrected form and try to express your meaning in simple words.
I also don't like this event because of its sexist meaning.
So you see we could learn from our mistakes. I reread my comment and found the mistake - I'll be more careful when I use a preposition. I know it's not easy for learners to use prepositions correctly - even native English speakers need to consult grammar books at times. Please check out my blog 'How to learn from our mistakes'.
1. Sorry for my mistake: 'at the day', 'at Lady/Girl Day'---->'on the day', 'on Women's Day'. We should use the preposition 'on' in that case. I'm not sure if Women's Day could be called 'Ladies' or Girls' Day. 'Lady Day' can be seen on a sign of a shop or supermarket, especially in non-English speaking countries.
2. We do have Men's Day, which's on November 19. But it's not so popular as Women's Day. If we really celebrate Men's Day next Nov. 19th, I'll go playing badminton, instead of shopping.
3. Do you know the history of Women's Day? Some women may think Women's Day insulting. We should be careful about 'sexist language' when you write or speak English. Do you hear of 'sexist language'?
People here celebrate the Women's Day (March 8th), too. Men here will do more housework at the day, and women can go shopping, which they always love to do and enjoy so much. The shopping mall is usually more dazzling at Lady/Girl Day to attract female shoppers. I always wonder why women are so fond of shopping. Happy Women's Day to all the female members here and all the other women around the world. Happy shopping!
Thank you very much!
Now, my friends and I are making plan for the Women's day of this year ^^ I'll take some nice, funny pics of our class and share with you all ^^
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But think about this, on Women's day, if you're a good man, you can help your wife on houseworks,... but what about 364 (or 365) days left?
Hiz, I'm so upset because of my plan on this Sunday...
I also don't like this event because of its sexist meaning.
2. We do have Men's Day, which's on November 19. But it's not so popular as Women's Day. If we really celebrate Men's Day next Nov. 19th, I'll go playing badminton, instead of shopping.
3. Do you know the history of Women's Day? Some women may think Women's Day insulting. We should be careful about 'sexist language' when you write or speak English. Do you hear of 'sexist language'?
Now, my friends and I are making plan for the Women's day of this year ^^ I'll take some nice, funny pics of our class and share with you all ^^
Thanks for your wish, I love my class very much!
Hi Elli,
The day 8 of March of this year is almost come, hope you will have a great day ^^
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