The Devastating Strom.

It seemed that the Thunder bolts were about to fall  into the ground and the flashes of light were showing their rigorousness as a whip against the wind. It was such a dark night, seemed there would be no hope,no good end-up.

Two  days ago in a fan-tas-tic  Summer morning Lara reached her Grandpa's farm- house.While she first stepped into the house  she had  been amused and her mind began wandering.

 

In the very beginning she let her granny to know that " this time I want to visit my elder Aunt's house". Her granny pursed her lips but immediately managed a smile and said " okay, my sweet heart, no problem,you must go"

So, next day Lara began her journey with one of her cousins towards her Aunt's house and, outwardly there was no worries. Usually summer evenings are long here and people like to take a stroll around.But, after half an hour the storm began...that devastating storm

When Lara reached her Aunt's house, she was experiencing her 5th labor pain. You may understand how does it mean in a remote area...in a dark stormy night...with thunderbolts and of course ...with out a medical assistant!

That night Lara for the first time faced a cruel reality which had not happened to her before. But she did not give up, instead of it, she made her way back  towards her granny's house. There was a little hope to get a medical assistant.

With this hope, Lara made her journey back. Obviously it was very tough for her. Every time she was frighting from being snake beaten. " Oh, how could I reach, it seems I am going to die by a snake bite!" Though there were many frogs on the way but luckily no snake was found.

 

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  • Thanks friends for doing corrections....I am happy to see that you read my writing and did corrections.

  • Can I say that she was foolish? Why didn't she stop and return back to her Granny's house when she had her first labour pain? She was taking unnecessary risk.

    Observations:-

    1. fan-tas-tic = should be written as fantastic

    2. "Every time she was frighting from being snake beaten". I am trying to understand what you're trying to convey in this sentence. Maybe it should be written as "She was very frighten from being bitten by the snakes"

  • ha..ha..ha...
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