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The Day I Met You

Posted by Ven.Indobhasa on October 15, 2015

On the day I met you,
There was full of stars in the sky,
And the stars were gazing at us.
The moon was smiling at us.

On that day you said to me
"You are a part of my life,
And I can't resist living without you
The world without you is worthless for me".

On that day we walked together,
And we swore to be together
Till the last breath,
And the kiss was so sweet.

But now, everything was changed,
You are away from me,
And you left me alone; however,
I still have a mind for you,
I will never forget the day
When I met you.

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Written By

Ven. Eindobhasa

http://www.kmtdiary.com/2015/11/the-day-i-met-you.html

love, poem

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Ven.Indobhasa October 17, 2015 16:23

Thanks to all for your comment. In fact, I have never had such experience of loving someone. :) My poem is based on only my reading novel, observing my neighbours around me. Anyhow, thanks to all again. ;)
ELF-Noor October 16, 2015 12:15

so nice and sad poem..

It's really painful when you give you precocious time to someone just because he/she meant to you, specially when someone show you dreams and then leave you in the darkness..

I hope, this just a word. You did not faced that all,which is mentioned in your poem.
Nimzaf October 16, 2015 5:49

You have expressed your emotions soooooo beautifuly.Thanks for sharing.
Onee-chan October 16, 2015 1:46

Nice! I like it.