READER'S DISCRETION ADVISED.
Thanks to Paula for enhancing the chapter i wrote through her amazing writing expressions and phrases , this gave the chapter a lot more betterment.
Timmy was (seriously stressed due to the events that had taken place). The brothers decided to remain patient until the official investigation (had reached) a conclusion.
Timmy called some of his friends to (ask their thoughts on the ) happenings. (The) night after the conference call (feeling exhausted) he (fell asleep early in the evening). (Later in the midst of) Timmy's(sleep his) body slowly started rising from the bed () levitating towards the ceiling. Silently floating in mid-air Timmy was totally unaware of his predicament , the silence continued and then without warning Timmy's body was flung violently to the bed , a loud blasting sound filled the room and Timmy's wife who was in the lounge (ran) towards the room , the horrifying scene which she witnessed after throwing open the bedroom door, left her in shock .The large antique bed she and Timmy shared lay in pieces,scattered () around the room that was now totally destroyed. Timmy lay unconscious in the mess . How she dialled the phone for the ambulance that rushed her husband's broken body to the hospital is a miracle in itself. There his brothers waited after receiving a hysterical and nonsensical call from Timmy's wife as well. Now in a coma () the doctors were hurriedly trying to gather more information through every means available to them. Suzanne also rushed to the hospital concerned for her brother.
That same night, Timmy woke up and immediately stood confused and in shock as to where he was. But when he turned around, he saw himself lying on what appeared to be a hospital bed. It felt as if he was looking at himself through a mirror. A heavy, deep voice interrupted his muddled brain and Timmy turned and saw a tall black shadowy figure () standing behind him. He jumped back in horror and within a split second that figure stood in front of him saying'' You dont want to keep him waiting '' , Timmy wanted to speak but was unable to utter any words (). The (s)hadowy figure grabbed him and they both disappeared .
It's been a month since Timmy fell into a coma. Marcus() somewhat superstitious, out of all the brothers, sensed that the chain of events might be signalling () a problem much different than first suspected. Especially once realizing no conclusion concerning any event could be explained. Marcus decided to take a different approach and this time it wasn't () law enforcement but something that deals in the matters of another dimension.
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Lol Dara Gino , i hope you overcome ur fear one day , i know ur a brave man .
Pahili, main bola, mujhai dravanee filmon dar lagta hai. I am afraid of these things. A person walk while sleeping, the supernatural phenomenon. Your blogs are giving me the creeps, White Knight. I always read them during the daytime, still, I am scared. I guess this is not the last chapter. Another one is coming again. I will tell you something, my dear good friend. When I watch horror films I always cover my eyes most of the times. You might not believe this, but it's true. Chapter six is very scaring for me.
No Problem MA Chy , start reading gradually and slowly , you will then grasp the meaning of the sentences easily and keep on doing it every time , Thanks .
Thanks a lot Elen , i hope you have a great time reading them all , please share your comments on what you think about them.
No Worries regarding the spellings Paula , it happens , u did an awesome enhancement , that what matters.
Roman actually the wife was the one who called the Ambulance as mentioned above but as i previously wrote that she was in shock meant that she was staring her husband in shock , seems a little confusing , i will try to clarify further more of the little things in the next chapter as they are important , Thank You.
Dear White Knight, I have to be a good reader to understand your story. But thanks a lot because your writings shows that my shortcomings of understanding.
Hello White Knight. I must read all the chapters to understand the whole story. I hope I can do it soon...
Wow Knight........I didn't expect to see this......LOL In reading it over I found I had made a couple of typo's as well as using the word was when honestly were would have been better. He felt as if he were looking at himself. No one is perfect by any means........me least of all.......plus the word dialed should only have one L.......not two. Many proof-reads are needed to make a writing as it should be.......forgive me for hurrying to get this back to you..........Unfortunately I am not the grammar guru that Rys is........But thank you.......HUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
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