the story and its contents are fictional and are written by me , i hope you all would have a great time reading .

Jonathan , the big brother , who came under the responsibility of his four younger siblings , Alpha , Timmy , Marcus and Suzanne , after the death of their beloved parents they came under the supervision of their big brother Jonathan , who loved them like his own children . parents didnt left any heritage so they were in an apartment on rent , Jonathan didnt have much education so for the sake of his siblings became motivated to work over time as a cashier in a nearby restaurant , he wanted his siblings to completer their education , in those hard time he found the love of his life , Stacy , they married and his siblings were happy to the extent as they found their mother , Stacy cooperated with him in those hard time , they all went to college , especially suzanne was more attached to her big brother , they had him as their last support and Jonathan was willing to do give them their all , as some years passed timmy , marcus and alpha graduated and suzanne planned to leave the country in search of opportunities regarding her field of economics , the fact that jonathan financed their needs led them into standing on the front and they were finally getting somewhere in their lives with their jobs.

Jonathan also had a son , little ben , he was very dearer indeed , as time droves , summarizing the fact , the 3 brothers and suzanne were quite capable now , which was a fact of relaxation for jonathan and his wife stacy , they were quite happy now and suzanne used to visit but the younger brothers , they were nowhere to be seen for months , busy life , jonathan never minded much , but he always want them to atleast call , stacy called them when jonathan wasnt around and told them that their brother expects their contact and misses them .

stacy on the call 

stacy - you know very well timmy that your brother misses you 

timmy - well stacy , you know what , you better take him to treatment because he scares me now 

stacy - and why is that , why are you saying like this 

timmy - well , you act like u know nothing but u very well know that for years now , i am done of listening about his imaginary friend , nobody gives a damn , i m done hearing that name and i aint believing that

stacy - i know but i cannot force him , his heart will break , u need to support your brother

timmy - the guy has become a freak , am outta here , u better stay with him and his imaginary brother

Jonathan always in his dinning room used to talk to someone and called him the 4th little brother , Maxis , he took his siblings , and many times have said to greet your brother maxis , Suzanne has been kind but brothers have always messed up every time , saying to jonathan that hes a mad man , which broke him several times , his wife supported him and jonathan refused to go to the doctor , he said that what he witnesses is real and everyone must believe that , times were taking a drastic turn as jonathan was finding hard to the job because of backbone issues that developed over time .

Jonathan - you know stacy , my brothers dont visit me anymore but i m happy that my angelic brother maxis stays by my side , no hurt full feelings , at least maxis and you understand my pain.

stacy - dear honey , dont worry , i will be with you all the time , you dont need to stress 

jonathan - i dont wanna stress but i m too tired , ben is growing up and i have to find a new job , they are not accepting me anymore , we have so many expenses to bear , i m in fear

stacy - dont worry , i will work , as a waitress in the near by restaurant 

suzzane came to know about this so she called the brothers and none of them bats an eye , they said that everything is fine with them and that big brother only exaggerates situation due to his mental health , suzzane started helping by giving money to stacy silently so jonathan doesnt know 

Marcus came by to visit , in his luxurious ride , big brother was sitting and became quite excited to see marcus after many months 

jonathan - OH MY , marcus 

'' hugs marcus ''

marcus - yes jonathan , i am here , check out my new ride , cool isnt that , the new model , just out in the market 

jonathan - wow i am so happy for you marcus bcz that is what i dreamed of , seeing you well settled

marcus - well , there i am but see this , the tactics i developed to reach that high in such a short amount of time , if you have developed a little percent of these , i hope you have reached somewhere but well what can i say

jonathan - hahaha , well , you know our times 

marcis - times are all the same , brain should be used effectively , i m now going to the car showroom meeting , clients must be waiting , take care

jonathan - take care marcus , do visit again 

stacy came out and jonathan did hide his tears successfully , smiling at her , telling her that marcus came by and he was happy to see him well , stacy knew the tears but acted normal , jonathan was obviously shattered and hurt of his brother words after all he did , in his life , for his siblings whom he took care of like his own children .

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CHAPTER 2 SOON TO COME , STAY TUNED 

CORRECTION OF MISTAKES ARE WELCOMED , I MAY ALSO HAVE  WRITTEN'' U , R '' WORDS IN A HURRY AS I WAS WRITING QUITE FAST . 

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  • CHAPTER 6 IS POSTED NOW , HAVE A READ GUYS 

  • Sure
  • Yes, i will read all the chapters soon!

  • Hi Roman , Glad to see you here , good thing is that i m going to continue writing final chapters in a few days , thanks for showing interest in the story , i hope u like it and have a great read .

  • Hi White Knight! I have just read your story! It is cool and interesting and looks realistic! I like it and i want to read other chapters now:) Thank you very much for sharing! But this Marcus is -_-

  • Thats an amazing analysis ⓔⓡⓩⓐ ,indeed ,the sacrifices he made and supported them like their own children , this cannot be weighed in terms of money , chpt 2 is also out erza , please have a read and share your valuable opinion , Thank you  

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  • Thanks a lot EMAN

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