A lengthy times past ago there existed a young, good heart young prince what lived in beautiful and big castle along with him family. His father, a king of this land, was good ruler but not every time have mind and time for care of his people. May be his lack for attention were not because of not good will but probabli the old king don’t wanted to offend or disturbing some people what was supported his in controling many of important matters for country, so that someone were happy with what the king do but there also were unhappy someones too. Mother of prince was good woman, honest, decent, humble and make very delicious biryani, but the prince very much like her falafel, even the little boy what take care to royal rabbits likes her dolma.
One day, may be it was after a big, tasty food in Eid sacrifice or may be it was during holy Holi feast, the young prince, with belly full and warm feeling spilling all over him, decided to take with his hands some pending matters that old king had no time to bother him royal mind with. For a young and not too experienced person, it must has be very difficult and cumbersome things to do. Yet the prince felt by heart and soul that he musted to do this for making his people feel happy and cared for. From tales said him by his beloved and caring nanny, he know that big things start with small ones. So, slowly and very despacito, the prince made small changes and regulations, of course, immediately were found many bad people grumbling and even mocked or disapprove his good intentions, but the prince, thanks to brave heart and perseverance, step by step, make his decisions come to work. It was not easy job, like eating shawarma, but prince turned deaf ear to all malicious grumble and go on with his work. Slowly, many bad or even horrific things become good and pleasant. When the old king finally kick the bucket, the prince, that was no longer young and uncunning but become wise and respected prince, took the seat of old king and in very short time the land was in bloom, people were happy and very thankful for the new king who had strong will and a goden heart to defeat all obstacles on the road to his goal.
Thank you so much for wasting your precious time to reading my blog, I hoping you enjoy read it.
Comments
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Dear rysperski,
Making mistakes is part of learning a second language. So, keep up the good work dear. (winking slyly)
Omg, sorry, i did not notice that... I know that aunt isn't ant... I don't know why i wrote aunt.
Oi, Roman,
The aunts had ants in their pants when they visited the prince in his castle on the top of the mountain...but hushhhhhhhh...let it remain the secret of Polichinell.... ; )
Rys, i can't say that i have found all your hidden mistakes, but while reading i was feeling like i am riding on the bike wich has square wheels, i can't say that i know what is incorrect, but i know that something is wrong... And thank you for these "very despacito changes":) But i like your third sentence of the blog, especially probabli. And while reading i expected to see some aunts or at least the mountains... And i like that prince is no longer "uncunning" :) Thank you very much for this blog! I like it!
oi there, folks
Thanks a bunch for reading my blog and leaving ur most appreciasted comments.
@ A+, i was drinking a bucket full of English language anguish...
@ Muskan, it is interestin to notice how well u read my hidden intentions.
@EC Member..muskan has commented for me, so i shall refrain from any further pestilent barking.
@Paula...ma'am...i wouldn't have said it better, thanks for your comment, i was waiting for it like da eathworms rain.. LOL
Well Rys I have to believe the errors in this blog were deliberate on your part. It was difficult for me to read. Although, I did work out the gist of the story.........but I will say.....it is an example of the need for research when writing......to try and make it clear and concise........to try and use the correct words........it is a clear example of what not to do when learning and trying to write.
EC Member yeah I checked twice if it was rys really or rahul : )) I agree with you I think it is for learners to try correcting it. I don't think it is pasted as it has typical rys' touch lol from eid-holi to despacito : ))
Thanks Rys it was amusing and mmm should I try my head for corrections.. mmm here is my first ... along with his family..
Hi there
I dont know about others but I can notice that the post is full of grammatical errors and Im wondering how come it has been happened :) Guess you posted this blog intentionally for learners to be corrected or you just copied the text without reading and pasted it here from somewhere else :D
As for the story , nice one )