Evangelina's writing challenge
The abandoned house (the end)
Ten years back, the scene was different. Gene's father was a pilot. He inherited a big fortune from his mother who used to own some lands in the country. He sold those lands and started his own project of the air taxi. His project started with one-engine planes to planes with two engines.
Bob, Sara's father used to work with him as an executive manager. Every single money was under his eyes. He told his wife to get rid of Rod. His wife objected. Their daughter, Sara, Mariah, and Gene, they were students in the same class. Sara and Mariah were like sisters and Gene used to love Mariah.
Then Bob convinced his wife by giving him some poison to delay him for some time in the hospital instead. His wife agreed after many words of persuasions from Bob. They agreed to put the poison in his coffee during one of Sara's birthdays. They invited Rod and his wife, their son, Gene, and of course, Mariah. Everything went as they had planned for it except for one thing.
Rod stayed in a hospital for six months and he lost his memory. His wife moved him to another hospital. Unfortunately, his wife died in a car accident and Rod was discharged before finishing his treatment. He was very weak and he did not know where to go. A farmer who needed people to work for him offered him a job. Rod agreed. He worked as a driver for six years and then something happened.
He came late that day and the owner was very angry. He punched him on his face. Rod fell on the hood of the car. When he came to his senses, he began to remember what was happening around him. His memory came back and instead of fighting his employer, he kissed him and thanked him too. He decided to take his revenge from Bob and his wife. He went to the police and told them the whole story.
The arrangement for the weekend holiday, their flat tire, and their coming to this abandoned house was his entire plot.
Comments
Bahut shukriya Mishaikh for pressing the like button.
Tak vony zrobyly, Roman. They would wait until the police arrive to take the people who were responsible for that wrongdoing. Thanks for your time and comment.
Wow! Asante sana Molemane. Oh my God! I am really flattered by your sincere words. Thanks a lot for that, I really appreciate it. You are a respected lady, my dear Mole.
Swagaat hei Rahul Wazir. You are most welcome and thanks for your time reading and giving your nice suggestions and views.
Vanakkam Kal I am glad you did that. Thanks for your nice comment.
:) I feel relieved, because the plot of horror story was in the mild genre. Very well done, you brought the story to the end in a surprising way, I thought things would get horrifying.
But it was actually sad, and how greedy Bob was, but money can make people become that way. So the plot was based on revenge.
I have to say, Mr. Dara, I am very amazed by your this marvelously magnificent contribution, thank you so so much for your participation, time and efforts. I really appreciate it.
Also I hope further on, you will feel like participating if any writing challenge posted here.
Smiles and <3
Hello dear Dara! I would like to congratulate you for being a good writer and a very good story teller.Once again Congratulations!!
Dear sir, Dara,
Interesting story.I learnt many new words from you.Thanks for sharing.
Kamu adalah orang pertama yang berkomentar. Thanks, mod. Onee_Chan for being the first person to comment on that scary story. Do you agree with me that you, Evangelina Danny Clark and his wife are making or rather giving more push to My English Club? I really appreciate the time you spend reading and commenting and now you are moderating too. May God be with you.
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