Jace used to work as a mechanic in a car company. He got a lovely house and a car. His life was good. A year ago he had an accident, and he couldn't work after that. He got heavily in debt with credit cards, catalogue debts and store cards. He got council tax arrears and rent arrears. He couldn't pay his gas and electricity bills. He is up to his neck in debt. He decided to approach Citizens Advice Bureau to ask for guidance.
Today Jace is going to Citizen's Advice Bureau, he is up to high doh. He can feel his heart beat. The building was renovated recently and up to date. Jace didn't let his wife knows where he was going . His wife called and asks 'where are you?'. Jace said, I am up to no good. I am going to ask help, If I couldn't succeed you may not see me again!
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I always like to read you, dear!
Dear night, Mitran, Noaspls, ELF Noor, JET, Evangelina, MIshaikh & Bathuhan, Thank you so much for taking your time reading liking, I appreciate it.
Dear JET, Thank you so much for taking your time reading and comment, I appreciate it.
It's always nice to read your comments. It's helps me to improve my writing.
Dear Tanya, It's my pleasure to participate in your writing challenge,
Thank you so much for taking your time reading and corrections. I appreciate it.
Jace supposed to inform his wife, that's he is going to ask for help, but he is hiding from, his wife. When she called, she find out, he is some where which he cant tell his wife. That's why I try to say 'I am up to no good. I should have add few sentences before to make it clear is int.
I heard this words' heavily in debt' before and I read it some where too. I am not sure weather its a correct term.
Thank you Tanya
Dear mitran, Thank you for taking your time reading and leaving comment. I appreciate it.
Dear night, Thank you so much for taking your time reading and leaving your comment. I appreciate it. Thank you for the corrections and your encouraging words.
Dear noaslpls, Thank you for taking your time reading and leaving comment. I appreciate it sweet heart. Yes, it is true life goes smoothly, when the unexpected things happens many people can't cope. That's why we should save for rainy days is int
Dear Adaline! I am so happy you have taken part in my challenge! You posted a true and sad story. Unfortunately, many people face such situations from time to time. Speaking about the text, I'd like to ask you about "I am up to no good". Do you mean your hero wanted to shoot down the bureau empmlyees? If you meant that, it is OK. Besides, I am unsure about "heavily in debt". It doesn't sound correct, but I will ask Dan, OK?
Thank you for a nice truthful story!
Dear Adaline,
I enjoy reading your blog up to the handle. Am I right? hihiihi...
Many people are facing similar problem as Jace nowadays. An accident will trigger so many domino's effects/problems which sometimes very hard to run away from them all.
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