It started getting dark so I decided to go back to my hotel. As I started to drive towards the town it started snowing heavily. Suddenly I heard a loud blast and realized that my tire had blown up causing me to stop at the side of the road. It was getting so cold in the car that I started to freeze.
Up ahead I saw a flicker of light coming from an old cottage. I made my way to the cottage to see if I could get some assistance. Before my hand even reached the door, it started to open. Inside I saw a figure of an old woman standing by the corner of the room, her body facing the wall, and she was swaying back and forth like an old rocking chair.
Then she started to cry, a loud shrill in her voice. Her shriek was so terrible that I started to get very scared, I turned to leave but she called me to stop. I turned around to see this nice old lady holding a new born puppy in her arms. As she smiled at me my body started to relax and I moved towards the fireplace where I saw the mother dog trying to get warm and to get some sleep after giving birth to five adorable puppies!
Comments
Hi Teacher Danny! Thanks a lot for the corrections, I will keep them in mind when using these phrasal verbs! Thanks for this great challenge, I enjoyed it! :)
Hi guys...Mishaikh, noaslpls, Serene, Andrey, Shoba, Adaline, DEVIL, Eva, and saba,
Thanks for reading and sharing your comments on my short thrilling story with a twist! Glad you all liked it! It was a fun write for me too! :)
I enjoy reading it.
Nice story! Good job, dear Alice. :)
Awwww ... your story has a cute ending. I was expecting that the old lady to come and chase you. LOL
nice writing. Just wait for Tany to make corrections if needed any.
Good work.