It is raining here.
Raining with thunder bolts!
Summer rain,
Getting back my old memories,
Getting back my sadness.
I am sitting here beside my desk top
Sipping my morning coffee,
What a moment!
But, what about
Who are now trembling under the summer rain
Like a bird in the woods?
Comments
Your verse is very lonely and sad ...
I wonder why memories get beck almost every time when it rains ? Especially sad memories .
Maybe , the rain drops are like tear drops .
Maybe , rain is falling from the skies like tears are coming from eyes..
Gosh, very controversial picture you depict in your poem
It touched me too.
nice writing Afro..keep writing..
We have been deprived of this blessings for long.
Too sad.
Nice memorable poem.
the summer rain always take a while of cooling to people, i like it,even desire to rush in the rain enjoying that.
Nice poem
Sometimes the rain brings back sad memories, it happens to me too and I don't really understand why except to feel it. You have beautiful words Afro! :)
It is raining here....we all are happy :) Nice poem Afro
Nice Poem