Some points for punctilious persons


   I'm a fortune teller; I can also easily see the future of everything, meaning I'm able to foretell about any event happening. At this moment, I'm going to tell you about the future of three turtles, crossing a mountainous route ,,, turtles !? ,,, yes three turtles, if I claim that I can foretell about everything, so I must be able to see the future of animals too. Am I right !? ,,, yes you are! ,,, OK, the curiosity, fluttering through your brain, can be obviously seen in your eyes, to be conscious about their story. So,let me start to concentrate on their position.

   Okaaayyyy, nice, I can see them, in this time they are passing an insupportable racky path through the mountains. They are coming from the Black Pearl see, of the evilness territory. They have been overcome by fear also exhaustion of the path, but the hopefulness prevents them to give up. They aim to go to the Light Lake; a beautiful lake near a lush bushy jungle full of the floriferous trees. The light beams of this region like a lighthouse helps them to continue the path. To achieve the lake, they must pass the forest.

   Let's see their future. Hmmm, oh, I can see only one of them near the lake, but they are three, I think something is going to occur to them in the jungle. Let's go back to the time that they are in the forest path, Hmmm ,,, let, let, let ,,, Oh, see here, too busy, many local animals encircle a pit ,,, OMG ,,, our three turtles have fallen into a trap. They are hanging at the outfall of the pit (trap's pit) by biting a tree branch put on the pit to cover it. This trap has been put at this place by a hunter to trap the bear. Position of the first hanging turtle is better than others means he is so near to the outfall of the pit. but the nether one's (the last turtle's) position is too critical.

   The poor turtles are struggling to come out, but the other animals out of the trap, are clapping in place of helping !! As a matter of fact, they are not clapping to hope the turtles to come out, but they are clapping, also singing a song together to make them hopeless to fall into the bottom of the pit. As the first one has better position to come out comparing others, the peripheral unfair animals are singing all together:

"The first is falling",,, Clap ,,, "The first is falling",,, Clap,,, "The first is falling",,, Clap

" Hurry up, hurry up, hurry up "  !!!

   OMG, unfortunately the first turtle (the upper one) fell into the pit. The animals are clapping, they are so happily saying:

"Fell, fell, fell, fell" , "So nice he fell" , Clap , "Fell, fell, fell, fell" , "So nice he fell" , Clap  !!!

   Also they are congratulating to each other. After that again, they are going to repeat their unfair action for the next ones too ! Seems the next turtle cannot tolerate more. Oh, no, the next one also fell, but the last one is still keeping his effort stoplessly. irrespective to the animals' song, moment by moment he is nearing to the outfall of pet. the animals seems to be too angry. oh they are rising their noises, better to say they are shouting !!, poor turtle, but he is still continuing. the animals are jumping to make him fearful, but he is still continuing. OMG, OMG, OMG, he came out!, unbelievably he came out!

   See !! the timorous animals are escaping, LOL. I got the reason of his success, can you guess !? No, it is too strange ! OK, I'm going to tell you the reason. Actually he lost the ability of hearing many years ago. therefore the animals' jumping, clapping, or singing in place of making him hopeless, have put the hope in his heart. In fact the last turtle has thought that they are encouraging him by clapping or jumping !!

Please mention the psychological or moral point(s) that can be gotten from the story.

Thank you all

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  • Dear DIMI

       Hello, Long time no see. Thanks for your nice comment. I remember your nice video about teaching how to say a poem which was so useful to me and other members. As you are an expert in the field of poems and stories, this comment is so significant to me, and I appreciate it.

    May God bless you bro.

  • Dear Saba

       Thanks for your nice comment and the compliment, I appreciate that.   :)

    Your comment, as the feedback of an old member of EC, from my blog, is so important to me.

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  • Dear Mohammad, what an interesting story you've written!

    I had read so much fun that I forgot to think about excluding letters :)))

    As for the moral points, I totally agreed with Setareh and Onee.

    Keep writing, I really enjoyed reading your blogs.

  • LOL, nice secret, I promise not to say that to anyone, :)  and surely you will be so surprised when you will read it !! and of course you will like it.   ;-)

  • I'm so busy those day. And I have already written a blog. I will post it tomorrow maybe. (hihi. I have a secret: I haven't read your blog yet. :D ) I will read it someday maybe. :D
    Just don't know why others commented such a long letter here. It must be so good :D
  • Dear Ann

    Long time no see !! , thanks for your nice comment, don't be wondered, you can do it yourself as well.

    Dear Sophia, I will try to do my best. Thanks 

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  • Wow I wonder how you can write such a very long blog without "d" and "w"!! (O.o)
  • Dear friends, Batuhan, Noona, Max, Ravi, Sophia, Luci, Stranger, Evangelina, Onee, Tanjin, and Elen I would like to thank you for reading and liking this blog. May God bless you all.

    Dear Elen, Happy to hear that  :)

  • No no no Mohammad, i didn't take it wrong, actually i laughed. Sometimes i am in hurry or lazy to write. I should had written that i laughed, ok, i will do it next time. Don't think bad :))

  • Dear Elen

       Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on this blog and also your nice compliment. Hope you have not got sad from my comment on your blog (related to challenge). Actually I used to joke others to make them laugh or at least a smile, so please don't take it on account of my impoliteness.

    Cheers 

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