All stories has always some message for the reader. This is the challenge to Write a story which make others to think deeply. It would be also nice to Write Your Quote about the Story Message.
Here is my Attempt.
Story:
One day Birds were flying in the Air, one bird said to other birds
Hey listen, we should go to home now, its late.. otherwise, we would unable to reach our home because of darkness.. lets go to home...
They were about to going their home, other bird said.. stop, look at the Sun, Sky is looking so Angry :(... But why?
They asked from the sun, why you are sad..
Sun said.. I want to shine in sky all the time, but I always leave the sky for the Moon..
birds said.. You will get tire, If you will walk all the time in the sky, You also need rest, as all of creature of GOD need rest.. other Wise, all creature could not do their job best..
Sun said, I think you are right.. But I don't wanna give my place to the Moon..
birds said, Hey.. don't you think.. You are thinking selfishly..You never Noticed that Moon also give you his Place Every day. Moon also leave his place for you to shine in the day..
Sun feel ashamed.. I think, I always give him Place in night.
birds laugh, we think, He always give you His Place in day.
Sun said.. I should leave now, You are all should go to your home also..
birds said yeah, we are going to home now But listen,
Always Remember
Nobody Can take your place, Everyone has its own place with unique Nature.(Elf)
You think Only You are doing for others, Think more May be Others are also doing the same for you.(Elf)
I have no idea how much I achieved the goal of this challenge. Tell me about my attempt. I really want to know.. I would be happy to know Your opinion about this story message.
Thank You.
Comments
What an absolutely magnificently beautiful story - Was this meant as a writing challenge?
If so then please try and repost sometimes and see what happens.
Only you can write something like this. Hope to see your creative and amazing posts soon.
#Rahul:
I know You can't think Like me. BUT You can Think in your own way.. because the reality is Everybody think in different way... ^.^
Thanks for admiring my Writing...
#Dear Rosemary:
yeap, Agree with you..that's can be the other side of the story. I mean the Theme of the above story can be
It is not tough, try to write..
I know, You can write better story then me..
You can choose any topic which you like, its depends on you.
You just need to write story. And quote related to story..
Thanks for asking, am good..
By Thought provoking story I meant A story which rise you thoughts philosophically.. A story which make you think alot about the subject..
I hope, you'll get now.^_^