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Short Story Challenge              The Treasure Island

  There is a story about a pirate island that have many treasures in it, I always wanted to visit it, So I went with friend to find a ship and a captain that will take us to the island. After two days we found the captain and the ship, it was a small ship with a large sail and can be sailed by two people or less, the name of the ship was the S S Lucy. “Ha-ha cool name “.

  When we were at sea the captain start to tell us about the island a stories about pirates who torture  everyone that get near their gold, and people who saw aliens land in there, we didn't believe any of these stories.

  For more than three days, I didn't see anything in the horizon, I almost lost hope in our captain he seem drank all the time but then out of no were,” it's the island “ my friend said. Finally, we made it I couldn’t believe my eyes it was a great island, I said this has to be it “the treasure island “.

  There was a wrecked ship at the shore it looked like a pirate ship , when we got there we found that we are not the only one there , an old man came to us and said " do you have a toilet paper ? " the first thing that came into my mind is " what the hell are we doing here ", the captain said that we have to make the camp before we lose the sun light , the night was amazing the old man told us about his adventures in his island as he said and about the aliens that want to destroy his island " mostly people like us ", he said that the pirates are smart and made the story about the gold so people come to the island and then they steal everything they have .

  In the next day the old man taught us how to get a fish with a spear made of regular knife and a stick .these where days that I will not forget for my entire life.

I hope you like it ,,, thank you everyone for reading :)  ""  rasty kross ""