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Posted by Mishaikh on August 27, 2016

This is my attempt in response to Danny's " Writing Challenge: Phrasal Verbs: OUT and AWAY:

Eshal stopped abruptly. HE was with a young beautiful woman. She was kissing and hugging him profusely.

“I will go away, and you should get your mind set to marry and not waste your time flirting with girls.”

She hugged and kissed him once again.

Eishal was feeling numb, her head was spinning. She grasped the gate firmly, when he turned back to kiss the woman at parting.

“He is a flirt.” Her heart became leaden. Her eyes were burning with tears.

“I do not want to see him anymore. I will leave this place and go far away from him.”

She went back home, packed her stuff and left the city forever.

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Mishaikh August 31, 2016 7:35

Thanks Serene for your comment!
Someone August 31, 2016 7:34

Great work!
Mishaikh August 30, 2016 11:49

Thanks Kal for liking the short story.
Kal August 30, 2016 11:47

A sad story,But great your judgement(justice). I greet you dear.I felt sorry about her unfortunate life.Let's pray for her,if she will be able to see a proper way.
Mishaikh August 29, 2016 12:39

Thanks Shoba for the pretty comment.
Shoba August 29, 2016 8:26

I wonder why men get caught easily when they flirt. LOL.

Good job, dear Mishikh. Thanks for sharing.
Mishaikh August 29, 2016 6:36

Thanks for another nice comment!
bet August 29, 2016 6:27

Another nice work!
Mishaikh August 29, 2016 4:35

I am very pleased Estanis to have such a nice comments from you.

Thanks a lot for liking my writing.
Mishaikh August 29, 2016 4:30

Thanks Mehboob for liking the story.

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