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Seeker's Writing Challenge: The Most Beloved One

Posted by Arif on March 20, 2016

1) At railway station, she was looking for her beloved, the most beloved one ever in the world, anxiously and impatiently lost in the vicinity of the station

2) Suddenly, her ears caught the voice of her beloved one shouting "mom! Mom!

3) She inhaled the breath of peace offering prostration of thank to God the Almighty

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Arif March 23, 2016 3:07

I still remember you are sweet rib of your husband, enough ? :)
Arif March 23, 2016 2:05

Thank you Mohammad for appreciating my humble attempt.
Mohammad March 22, 2016 17:28

Good job bro.
Arif March 21, 2016 9:37

Yes, I still remember you are mom of EC having great sense of humour.

Thank you mitran, mom for commenting :)
Arif March 21, 2016 9:35

Seeker, I liked your challenge too. :)

Thank for passing by and liking it.
Arif March 20, 2016 18:50

You can say that again!

Thank noona for encouraging by commenting
Arif March 20, 2016 16:35

Well, your comment is short but very cogent. Mother's love is priceless and rare. Therefore, Allah the Almighty placed heaven under mother's feet. This is the very reason, service to my parent at their need is always in my pray.

Thank you, nida for commenting and encouraging.
Arif March 20, 2016 16:25

The love of mother for her child is not comparable to that of her child for herself. The mother love her child when he is nothing and too fragile, but on the contradictory the child, having grown up, send his parents to old parent house at the time when they need him.

Thank Evangelina for commenting and appreciating.
nida March 20, 2016 14:47

There's no love like a mother's love. This is the very reason that Allah the Almighty has compared His love to a mother's love.

Nice story. Thanks for sharing.
Arif March 20, 2016 6:38

This is the best truth when the child is a dependant, but the child remains the most beloved for her mother since he is born till his death even after death.

Thank you abida for your comment.