dad: ''I am your dad and I have every right on you''! Go and take some sleep, I want to talk with you tomorrow morning. And, I hope you might change your decision'', he murmured. Then Mr. Mark went to the balcony." It's just a murky night, murky and hopeless!" he uttered with a heart break. He decided to past the whole night over there. He just couldn't believe his own son got such a poor marks in science, damn!
Jack: Jack also felt very sorry. But, he just couldn't understand why it was so important and why his father became so rude to him! " Okay, I think, I have to grab some sleep and let's see! He then retrieved his blanket and went to the bed.
Dad: On the other hand, Mr. Mark couldn't close his eyes. He was just wondering and pacing! Trying to make sense why his son did so bad.
Jack: Now, Jack started dreaming ...what a wonderful career it would be if he could be an artist!
Dad:" Artist, sheet, is it a career, poor kid! I must try to change his mind, as a father, it is my holy duty"'.
Jack: Jack liked to wake up early in the morning. He woke up and headed towards the living room."Oh, My...papa why are your eyes so swollen, did not you sleep''? His dad just stared at his little son and felt how little and innocent he was!
dad: ''Yes, my boy, I couldn't sleep in a wink last night. I was thinking, I couldn't raise you properly and may be I didn't give you much more time. And, I just feel sorry to see that you have got such a poor marks in science and more over, you want to become an artist.''
Jack: Now jack sensed it why his papa was so angry on him last evening. He got closer and kissed his father and told, '' look, papa, I am just 9 years old. There is plenty of time to be corrected and to get good marks. And, who can say who I will be in reality? And, if you ask me about my poor marks, I am assuring you, I will try my level best to do better in upcoming days. Now, please get some smile, at least try to purse your lips, for my shake, papa!
Dad: He just couldn't stifle his laugh and thought this was the difference between an adult and a young chap! And, that is why, they are so prospective!
Comments
It's fair...haha...that child resemble to his father.. Nice.. :)
Thanks..noa and others.
Uh uh! Putting pressure on a young kid. But I guess it's common nowadays when parents are putting too much pressure on their children to do well in school exams.
Observation:
1. It's 'whole night' and not 'hole night'. I'm sure it's just a typo.
Nice writing. kids are so pure and innocent. they never bear any grudge in their hearts. I liked the happy ending.
corrections.