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Sadness Everywhere

Posted by ELF-Noor on March 27, 2015

Sadness Everywhere

Tonight's moon looks sad

May be the moon lost his stars,

Sky looks crying

May be sky lost his rainbow

Everyone's smile looks fake

May be they lost their True happiness,

Everything seems blur

May be these things lost his colors,

Flowers seem black and white

May be the flowers lost their beauty,

Chirping of birds is unpleasing

May be the birds lost their home,

There is sadness everywhere

May be I am feeling sad inside.

by  Me(ELF Noor)

Do be sad, its just a poetry...:p

correct grammatical mistakes..:) 

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  • ELF-Noor October 18, 2015 14:35

    #TaNjiN thanks for appreciation.. I am fine now thanks God.. poem was written in the time when i was feeling sad...:)

    #Mishaikh sometimes words make us sad.. thanks for stopping by..

  • Mishaikh October 17, 2015 19:05

    I do am sad, even its just a poem!

  • ELF-Noor March 31, 2015 6:30

    oh thanks for this nice video..!!!

    i liked this video..!!

  • MARY March 30, 2015 16:47

    Hi ELF Noor, no worries, it's nothing important. It's just that your poem about sadness made me feel that i needed to add a lil 'smile' in between... so i just linked a funny song titled 'always look on the bright side of life' ;)

  • ELF-Noor March 28, 2015 19:43

    -thanks mishaikh for your comment..

    Mary Thanks for your Commet..But I can not open this Video because here YouTube is not working.. Can you tell me the Title of this Video.. !!!

  • MARY March 28, 2015 16:17

  • Mishaikh March 28, 2015 10:05

    دل تو اداس ہے میرا + شہرکیوں سایئں سایئں کرتا ہے

  • ELF-Noor March 27, 2015 19:45

    -thanks Nida, nimzaf, Muskan, Seeker for your comment...

    -Setareh yup now i am not sad but when i was writing this poem then i was feeling sad...!!!

  • ELF-Noor March 27, 2015 19:41

    -Samuel... yup Inshallah next well be joyful.. thanks for comment..

    -Anonymous.. if you "like" is for this creativity(in pic) then i think your comment is for my poetry.:)

     -Thanks Luci for your comment and i m glad to see your comment here about correction of my mistakes.

  • ELF-Noor March 27, 2015 19:32

    -camel thanks for comment.. yeah right sadness and happiness is the part of our life. if we can not feel sadness then how we can know about meaning of happiness...

    -:D Evangelina one can only be able to write a poetry if he/she faced any tragedy in life. ;) yup thinking about sadness always answers multiple, gave multiple reasons about sadness.. thanks for liking my poem and for wish..

    -Onee-chan thank you so much.. yeah we should try to stay happy and makes others happy...

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