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The data shows the sales of Coca-Cola in regions in 2000 such as North America, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and Middle East. In addition, the line graph illustrates the price of share from 1996 to 2001.
It is clear that the proportions of sales have the big difference, and the value of company on stock market also fluctuates over the time between 1996 and 2001.
In 2000, the percentage of sales in North America is the biggest volume, 30.4 %. The second largest sales is in Latin America with 25.7%. The sales volume of Europe is less nearly 5% than Latin America. The Asia is the second lowest sales of Coca-Cola with 16.4 %. Africa and Middle East has the lowest sales in all regions is 7%.
The share price of Coca-Cola varies from 1996 to 2001. Between 1996 and 1998, the share increases sharply although it decreases a little bit in the year 1997. After the middle of 1998 to 2001, the share fall rapidly although it increases shortly in 2000.
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