Let me go
Don’t hold me in your arm
Let me enjoy each moment of life
Time if flying
I don’t want to be just lying
Let me go
Let me see the sunrise
Let me have all the minutes of daylight
Don’t embrace me so tight
Your hug is warm but I want to feel the warmth of sun,
The coldness of snow and the freshness of rain
One day maybe not so far I will lie
Motionless and lifeless
I will die
But for now I want to live
I want to run, to laugh, to cry to…..
Let me go
Let me catch the warms
Let me make my dreams come true
Not just keep dreaming
In your hug, my beloved BED let me go.:D
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Ah, BED... Sigh... Till the end I thought that it is about discrimination against women.
Well, it is really nice to know that you feel such a great feelings to your BED :D
I wonder, what a masterpiece can you write about real love:)
But hmmm... Just one single word changes the meaning of the whole poem!
Thank you for sharing!
I see here a woman(i mean poem) who is mixed up in an affair between her feelings and responsibilities.She both wanna stay and go..
Oops, my bad. You were right. I didnt notice i wrote if instead of is. Thanks for pointing it out.:)
Dear Clue, so from the first line you had the clue that what is this all about.:) Thanks for your comment.And yes"time is flying" anything wrong?
Dear Luci, I would work more on it if i read your post about poem, anyway it was so useful. Next time i will try to do as you said. Thanks for stopping by.
Dear Onee, yours about acne is so funny indeed.:D thanks for stopping by.
Setareeehhhh, OMG... :D
I was so serious to read. I was thinking to comment that this is so melancholic one. A poem for the lover. But, yeahhh, it is the lover. :D. I just realized when I read the last line.
You're very humorous this time. Once I ever write this kind of poem. :D
You always come whenever I miss my beloved
Your friends are coming whenever I drive you out
You always make my face blush
I hate you, but you always come, ACNE
:D
So interesting poem, dear. I like it. Million thanks for writing poem. I'm so glad you take part in this challenge. ^_^
Dear Evangelina, thanks for your kind comment.:)
Dear Risty, then maybe we can make a melody for it.:) Thanks for your nice comment.
Dear Mishaikh, really!? Thanks for your inspiring comment. It means a lot to me.:)
Dear Learner, wow! I loved your short poem too. Thanks for stopping by.
Dear Frank, Hahaha, actually that was my intention, to mislead the reader. It seems i succeeded. Thanks for your comment.
Dear Estains, Thanks a lot for your comment.
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