Well guys, before I take off my plane, I would like to remind you and myself of my unique sense about poetry. Since I am very talented in this field, So I have no problem at all joining any challenges regarding poetry or expressing my magnificent words about it. :D
So, here we go:
Natation..
I love you so much, Natation..
I can't live without seeing you day and night, Natation..
Please don't leave me and go, Natation..
Don't let me die lonely in the oceans of your absence, Natation..
I see you in all photos, Natation..
I listen to your voice though all voices, Natation..
When my donkey heehaws, I remember the night that we spent together.. (close your eyes guys) -_-
When I woke up the next day without seeing you beside me, Natation :D
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That was enough for your curiosity about my talent, guys :D
I think that writing challenge is going crazy... lol :D
PS(1): Please note that due to the fact that I don't know the meaning of "Natation", So I have imagined it as a name of a super beautiful lady alike with the Russian feminine name :Natasha"
PS(2): If you like the poem, please don't hesitate to ask me for more :P
PS(3): Thank you Onee-chan for setting my crazy thoughts free :D
Comments
Thank you so much for your support, sit ^^
I think Mary is familiar with my way of kidding, and she knows that it was a trial to put the smile on your faces here :)
I agree with what you said :) Thank you again for taking it in its intended way :)
AG, you really made your blog funny! Onee didn't ask us to write serious poetry. When I read yours, "natation" sounds like Russian name Natasha for me. But if I took it like "swimming" it would sound even more funny. I give you my hand on that! Life would be so dull and grey without humor. The ability to laugh at ourselves is the main feature of our sanity
I thought it would make a funny addition to the challenge... So, I believe if I succeeded in that, then It was because of her idea.. and if I failed, then it was because of my silly way..
Thanks for reading my nonsense.. it's a pleasure to me :P
funny nonsense!
Btw you always love to ruin Onee's games, right? XD
just kidding! :P
setareh :D
So nice of you to convey her love message to me..
Please tell her that I am dying to see her :D
Natation, don't leave me alone.. Natation :D
hahaha.. you don't want to hear more, do you?
How can i live without you, Nicolay
Just open your eyes; I'm right next to you, Nicolay
Natation wrote this to you; she has addressed you with a Russian name:D.
Anyway i admire your courage to write a poem because it's really hard.
Now, I'd like to reply to all of you respectively
Estanis, high five to you too, My friend ;)
Batuhan, in my country, if you fall down, they will tell you this proverb :D "live long and fall again and again". I wish your next fall will not be in the love of Natation :D :D
Rajib, No way, I don't share My Natation with others, man :P
Onee-chan, ops.. I wish I did not spoil it up :| don't tell me you did not admire my skill in poetry :X
I really enjoyed writing this more than I enjoying writing jokes in my previous challenge.. Thank you for giving me the chance for showing my buried talents :D
by the way, of course I checked the meaning of "Natation" in the dictionary before I wrote this.. It was really only for fun.. so please don't be so serious about it.. I appreciate your endeavor for supporting this club with your valuable ideas.. you only have to expect and tolerate a little bit revolution, and I am sure you do :P
Shadow, Thank you for your respect. I respect you back my friend. And you are very welcome.
Serene, Stay connected. The next season, I am going to reveal her mother's name :P
Lady Noor, Thank you so much for your comment.. I wish this laughter will spread and reach the people of Aleppo and Syria in general, so they are able to live and survive and conquer their enemies.. Amen ya Rab..
ELF-Noor, I am having my "Natation everyday between 5:00PM to 6:00PM". you wanna join? :P
Thank for your comment.. I become worried about this bird's voice after your comment :-!
Kal, OMG, hahahahahahahaha.. please don't tell me that you are taking this seriously... it was just for fun, dear :)
Risty Aven, my dear :D exactly what I expected form an intelligent person like you is to go on with my poem :D Thank you so much for your comment ;)
Danny Clark, Thank you for your support :D Of course, I checked the meaning in the dictionary before I wrote this.. it was only for fun as I told Onee. thank for your nice words :) Happy for you like it :)
Dear AG! As for me, everything is OK and nothing to apologize for! We all need to speak up our minds from time to time. And having a girlfliend is so natural for a man!
Here is my crazy attempt if you are interested
http://www.myenglishclub.com/profiles/blogs/to-onee-s-poetry-challe...
Hello Dear Friends, Estanis, Batuhan, Rajib, Onee-chan, Shadow, Serene, Lady Noor, ELF-Noor, Kal, Risty Aven, and Danny Clark :D
First of all, thank you for taking your time to read my hallucination, and so sorry if I have disappointed your high expectations on me. You know that it's all about disappointment when it comes to poetry :D
Well Guys, don't take it so seriously.. OMG, I got an impression of Kal's comment that she believed that I got a girl friend indeed :D it was apparently a joke. It was just a deal between me and Onee-chan that she said I didn't need to be skilled at poetry to participate, and in my place, I accepted to take this deal :D
My friend! Natation means swimming, but I like the idea of your using this word! Ha-ha!
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